I Was Demoted at the Beginning, and I Cultivated as a True Immortal in Tianlao

The writing is okay. I suggest you use more ancient poems from Chinese textbooks.

The third large-scale picture is written as a university. It would be good to revise it when I have time. Try not to make typos.

It's very good. This book is not muddled at all in the beginning, and the ideas are clear, but it's just not enough to read.

: Invincible Flow Funny Fantasy + Time Travel + Fantasy Immortal Cultivation and Cool Novel. The writing is not bad, the plot rhythm is smooth, the setting is not very new, it is a routine from the past.

You can take a look, it looks pretty good