Zongwu: My Wife Invites Me to the Moon and Lies Down

Why is it written in such a mess? I don't understand! My thoughts are incoherent and my sentences may be defective! The concept is pretty good and novel, but it seems to have some flaws.

Forget it, forget it, I can't stand ten chapters, it's so annoying, I don't know how to write, so I'm obsessed with it, and it's beyond the horizon.

Indiscriminate use of punctuation marks Random pronouns