Struggling to Survive Between Three Protagonists

Bao'er, I think you are right. I have very little experience in writing. In the process of writing this novel, I was able to discover that I have many shortcomings, but I don't know how to correct them. I can only work hard and keep updating to get a guarantee. What can be said is that I am not capable of writing the feeling I want. I also like to read novels. The feeling you have is also present when I read my novels. I am very happy that you can point out the shortcomings of my article. As long as I can correct the shortcomings of some articles that you pointed out, I believe that my articles will become better and better.

I have read Chapter 21, and I can barely keep reading. Barely means that sometimes it feels annoying, but sometimes it feels good, and the two feelings alternate. First of all, the heroine's performance and words make me sometimes feel that she does not understand emotions, like she is missing some kind of emotion, but sometimes I feel that she is not missing it and it is normal. Especially the process of getting along with the first son of luck, it is like pretending not to understand in the ambiguity, knowing clearly that she will leave or choosing to have a vague relationship because the system says that the son of luck does not value feelings. It is uncomfortable to watch. Secondly, it may be because this is the type of book. After all, there are three sons of destiny. The emotions between them must be blurred in the process of getting along with them, so that there will be other stories (that is, the emergence of the plot). Personal feelings, if you don't like it, don't criticize, thank you! But I don't want to classify it as dislike, after all, it is the author's hard work!