We've All Traveled Through Time, Who's Still a Licker?

If you don't like to read junk articles, I don't recommend reading it.

You can only read the first fifty chapters of this book, and it becomes more and more rubbish after that, so I will abandon the book decisively.

Okay, this is my first novel.

Generally speaking, I think the book is okay, but the ending is too fast. The beginning was good, but it suddenly ended. It ended a bit hastily. Is it because I can't continue writing? But it's better than some completely crappy books.

Throughout the text, xxx refers to xxx, xxx refers to such a blatant word for water.

A common problem with Kaola's writing in the early days (and it still exists now) is that it is very attractive in the early and middle stages, but in the later stages there is nothing to write about, and the drama is forced. There are also some real problems that existed in the early days but are much better now. First, the male protagonist. To put it nicely, the male protagonist is informal, but to say it worse, he is too sloppy, and the male protagonist is a bit too versatile. Although it is a novel, it is also a bit outrageous; second, the plot. At least 20% of a chapter is composed of memes, which can indeed bring traffic, but it loses its appeal after a few years, and the work has no long-term vitality. In addition, there is also the problem of this film itself: the female protagonist. I have always been quite tolerant of the image of the koala heroine, but I can't comment on the three heroines in this book, as well as the supporting roles. Xia was originally quite good, but the part when she was the anchor was really dull and the impression was not good. I personally preferred Xia before, but then I went directly to Lin. After all, she is the only normal protagonist in the whole book. Of course, if you don't think about it and your Internet memory is still in 2023, then this book is still good to read. There are not many urban harems in the first place. If you like urban harems and don't have high requirements for the plot, you can read it.

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