Our Ordinary and Warm Daily Life

How to put it this way, if this is a diary, it would definitely be full marks, but as a novel, there are no elements that promote the development of the plot. As for practicing writing, there is nothing special, but there is one thing, the writing is very good. It's your description of the characters and their personality changes. You can try other directions next time, don't limit yourself to one place.

I'm here to go into the pit and see what it's like. I can't look at the cover outside.

It's okay. The plot is a bit dull at the beginning, but it improves later on. If this is your first book, it's probably not going to be as good. I suggest you practice writing in the future.

The plot is okay, but I personally feel that the beginning should not describe the summer vacation, but should start from the campus. Although the plot of the summer vacation is okay, I feel that it is not as interesting as the military training. The plot of the campus is good, and it allows Wu Ming to appear more. I like this character very much.