System + daily life + chasing husband + non-splendid articles + don't scold the author...
Gu Chen was in a car accident. When he opened his eyes, he found that he had traveled to the world of immortal cultivation. Before he could recover, he discovered that the original owner was actually a scumbag!
On his way to repay the original owner's debt...
"I'm sorry, senior sister, can we just forget about this engagement?"
"Sister, please stop seducing me, I have changed my mind!"
"Sorry girl, I was joking before, I don't like you."
"Help! I already have someone I like, so don't come over!"
"Now your meridians are broken..."
"Old man, how about we make a bet?"
"What bet?"
"Bet me a hundred years to be the best in the world."
Scholarly Family: Gathering family members…
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Why can't you criticize the author?
Du Yao, please write better and I will give you all my monthly votes. ♡(*´∀｀*)(*´∀｀*)♡
The author's update is too slow, I hope it can be faster ψ(｀∇´)ψ
I'm just posting some comments, I don't know if the author can read them.
The fresh parts of this book are well described, but some parts... Look very awkward. It's not that it doesn't look good, it just looks awkward.
First of all, when the protagonist and the villain are fighting in the street... The protagonist is really useless, there is a problem here. The protagonist took the pill rewarded by the system, and the little fat man gave him another one. Logically speaking, it shouldn't be that useless, so it would be fine even if it was useless. The problem is that the previous palm technique was used to break the water tank. The senior sister, who is more qualified, can't practice it. The protagonist can actually practice it... After practicing it, she is still so useless? How useless does that senior sister have to be? ? ?
There is also the sucking palm that is rewarded by the system on Loli. Logically speaking, the system reward should be enough, but a set of combos can damage Gua Sha? ? ? So what's the use of rewarding these things?
The key is that there is not much difference between the protagonist and the villain, just a small level difference. The fiancée has not yet reached Jindan and fights Jindan. The protagonist, who is in the same realm, is giving people scraping? ? ?
It can be changed to a situation where the protagonist defeats miserably, and then the villain surrenders. As a result, the villain uses nails to attack without moral ethics, and the fiancée intervenes. Personally, I think this is better and more logical. Otherwise, why would the protagonist be working so hard to fetch a water tank? Anyway, a useless horse makes the useless thing of Senior Sister even more evident...
Then there's the fat man's talisman. Can't the skin be broken every time? If the skin is not broken, then what use are these charms? I can understand that these talismans can't hit monsters. Not to mention serious injuries, at least the skin is broken... However, every time Fatty's talisman can't even break the skin, it's very...
Also, the ghost story was too slow, and the fox demon part was too slow for me to watch... The protagonist was stuck in the village for too long, and the pace was draggy. And when his fiancée and the head disciple came to the rescue, he was very... Very dumb. Something is obviously wrong, it makes sense even if the protagonist has no background. The fiancée's elder granddaughter has no guardian? The head disciple also has no guardian? ? ? There's obviously something wrong, two little Karami come to die and no adults are following them? ? ?
And the head disciple just opened his mouth to come to the other party to save the calamity? ? ? No, how did Little Kalami, a golden elixir, know that the other party was a tribulation breaker? ? ? How much higher is this? Isn't it more reasonable to have a Taoist protector come here and open his mouth to defeat the other party? Otherwise, a small golden elixir knows a hammer?
So far, the fresh and refreshing places are best described, but I guess you are not good at describing the fighting places. Then there should be less descriptions of fighting, otherwise it will really feel... Just like what I said before. The protagonist in the same realm obviously practiced his palm skills well, but he ended up with a set of combos that caused scraping. I can't imagine how disabled the senior sister was. It was too awkward and inconsistent...
Ah, the following is my personal opinion. Opinion
I think this book is the purest among the dozens of books I have read, and the overall feeling is very good. For example, "The male protagonist is not some brainless childish person who lowers his IQ." "It's not just arrogance, he has a backer behind him, and although the cultivation realms are not very well divided, this is acceptable." The plot of this book is as if it really happened in this world, and it gave me a special sense of intimacy when reading it. Also, the image planned by the male protagonist is that of a pure love warrior, not a scumbag of a man. I fully agree and accept this. I like such people, whether virtual or real. Generally speaking, I think such people are good. Also the author seemed not very interested in writing the book. I saw that some readers said it was not well written. , But in my opinion, this book is already very good, both in terms of character plot and picture description. All just right.
Also, I really hope that if the author doesn't want to write this book anymore and wants to end it, the protagonist and Miss Chaoyan will be together. Let's write them together in the end. If I really want to know who I hate to leave the most in this book, my answer is Miss Chaoyan. I hope the author writes it this way. After I finish writing, I hope to write an extra chapter. Anyway, I will just say, "This book is a good book and worth reading!!"
Update it quickly, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest for so long
The author said that after gathering 7 million positive reviews, he would update 700 million words. Show them all to me.
Why has the author canceled it? It's obviously a good work with novel themes. It's such a pity.
"Why do you keep the light on and wait every night?"
"It's too dark, I'm afraid you can't find your way home, Gu Chen."
Scholarly Family: Gathering family members… Does it look good or not? Just squeak.
Why can't you criticize the author?
Du Yao, please write better and I will give you all my monthly votes. ♡(*´∀｀*)(*´∀｀*)♡
The author's update is too slow, I hope it can be faster ψ(｀∇´)ψ
I'm just posting some comments, I don't know if the author can read them. The fresh parts of this book are well described, but some parts... Look very awkward. It's not that it doesn't look good, it just looks awkward. First of all, when the protagonist and the villain are fighting in the street... The protagonist is really useless, there is a problem here. The protagonist took the pill rewarded by the system, and the little fat man gave him another one. Logically speaking, it shouldn't be that useless, so it would be fine even if it was useless. The problem is that the previous palm technique was used to break the water tank. The senior sister, who is more qualified, can't practice it. The protagonist can actually practice it... After practicing it, she is still so useless? How useless does that senior sister have to be? ? ? There is also the sucking palm that is rewarded by the system on Loli. Logically speaking, the system reward should be enough, but a set of combos can damage Gua Sha? ? ? So what's the use of rewarding these things? The key is that there is not much difference between the protagonist and the villain, just a small level difference. The fiancée has not yet reached Jindan and fights Jindan. The protagonist, who is in the same realm, is giving people scraping? ? ? It can be changed to a situation where the protagonist defeats miserably, and then the villain surrenders. As a result, the villain uses nails to attack without moral ethics, and the fiancée intervenes. Personally, I think this is better and more logical. Otherwise, why would the protagonist be working so hard to fetch a water tank? Anyway, a useless horse makes the useless thing of Senior Sister even more evident... Then there's the fat man's talisman. Can't the skin be broken every time? If the skin is not broken, then what use are these charms? I can understand that these talismans can't hit monsters. Not to mention serious injuries, at least the skin is broken... However, every time Fatty's talisman can't even break the skin, it's very... Also, the ghost story was too slow, and the fox demon part was too slow for me to watch... The protagonist was stuck in the village for too long, and the pace was draggy. And when his fiancée and the head disciple came to the rescue, he was very... Very dumb. Something is obviously wrong, it makes sense even if the protagonist has no background. The fiancée's elder granddaughter has no guardian? The head disciple also has no guardian? ? ? There's obviously something wrong, two little Karami come to die and no adults are following them? ? ? And the head disciple just opened his mouth to come to the other party to save the calamity? ? ? No, how did Little Kalami, a golden elixir, know that the other party was a tribulation breaker? ? ? How much higher is this? Isn't it more reasonable to have a Taoist protector come here and open his mouth to defeat the other party? Otherwise, a small golden elixir knows a hammer? So far, the fresh and refreshing places are best described, but I guess you are not good at describing the fighting places. Then there should be less descriptions of fighting, otherwise it will really feel... Just like what I said before. The protagonist in the same realm obviously practiced his palm skills well, but he ended up with a set of combos that caused scraping. I can't imagine how disabled the senior sister was. It was too awkward and inconsistent...
Ah, the following is my personal opinion. Opinion I think this book is the purest among the dozens of books I have read, and the overall feeling is very good. For example, "The male protagonist is not some brainless childish person who lowers his IQ." "It's not just arrogance, he has a backer behind him, and although the cultivation realms are not very well divided, this is acceptable." The plot of this book is as if it really happened in this world, and it gave me a special sense of intimacy when reading it. Also, the image planned by the male protagonist is that of a pure love warrior, not a scumbag of a man. I fully agree and accept this. I like such people, whether virtual or real. Generally speaking, I think such people are good. Also the author seemed not very interested in writing the book. I saw that some readers said it was not well written. , But in my opinion, this book is already very good, both in terms of character plot and picture description. All just right. Also, I really hope that if the author doesn't want to write this book anymore and wants to end it, the protagonist and Miss Chaoyan will be together. Let's write them together in the end. If I really want to know who I hate to leave the most in this book, my answer is Miss Chaoyan. I hope the author writes it this way. After I finish writing, I hope to write an extra chapter. Anyway, I will just say, "This book is a good book and worth reading!!"
Update it quickly, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest for so long
The author said that after gathering 7 million positive reviews, he would update 700 million words. Show them all to me.
Why has the author canceled it? It's obviously a good work with novel themes. It's such a pity.
"Why do you keep the light on and wait every night?" "It's too dark, I'm afraid you can't find your way home, Gu Chen."