Hp: I Became a God at Hogwarts

Great author, actually I think this book is good in every aspect, but the ending is too sloppy, I hope you can change it! Come on, write more good articles

Why do I feel like the pace of this book is a bit fast? The details are not that good...

It doesn't look good.

There are some typos, but it looks good

As a time traveler, I don't know how much old Malfoy dotes on children. The protagonist threatens Draco when he comes up. How can a declining family protect the protagonist? To put it bluntly, Black, who is in his prime, is not as good as Malfoy. The protagonist is too willful in life and behavior. Personal suggestions

It's Hogwarts in the original book, not Hogwarts

I don't really like this novel. I'm a real fan of the novel and it's a bit hard to describe.

I don't know if it's my problem, but I think the book progresses too fast. In fact, the plot could be written in more detail and the characters could be described in depth, which would make it more tense. You jumped too fast. In fact, in the eyes of some people, it may be that one person in the original work has changed his gender, and they are watching the original work through another person's eyes. In fact, they are living the plot.

It looks good, but don't make too many typos, there are too many to count.