Being a Cannon Fodder in the Last Days, I Just Want to Live

The plot of the whole text is okay, but it feels a bit draggy. I feel that some parts are unclear and there are many typos and wrong sentences. I put forward these small suggestions and hope that they can be greatly improved! (-^^-) Also, can there be another extra story? The male protagonist is very good and always protects the female protagonist. The heroine is also very good, a person who is greedy for life and afraid of death, who wants to live to the end, and sacrifices herself to save the world... I feel sorry for them, please let them be together in the extra story!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking~(¯ㅂ¯Յ)

I've been busy lately, so when I finish writing it later, it will probably be around the winter vacation. If there are any readers who can see it, please express your love❤️❤️

The manuscript is being saved but has not been sent out. It is in the draft box and I would like to save more. Don't worry, although the writing is very good, I will definitely finish this book! Thank you for putting up with this, it makes me happy if someone reads it! And the sisters who join the bookshelf! Thank you! I will work hard later! Work hard to improve yourself! Love you so much! ❤️❤️❤️

I hate this male protagonist. I can be as far away from the male and female protagonist as I want