We Haven't Even Graduated, Yet You, a Dropout, Became a God of War

This article tells about our male protagonist, Chen Fan From an ordinary person with insufficient blood The path of adventure after gradually becoming a warrior Male protagonist, Chen Fan Heroine, love Overall, the author has clear ideas It's a good article worth reading!

The ending of the novel is a masterpiece, and it can be considered a good ending. Chen Fan saved the world in the end and then traveled back in time, leaving us with a hazy ending.

Generally speaking, I just write whatever I dream about. I don't know how to write emotional dramas, so don't write them. I go to bed as soon as I meet you. I write the protagonist like a stallion. I use the power of the whole country to awaken this ability, but it doesn't show any effect at all.

After reading more than 600 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. In fact, it's a bit hard to watch after leaving the earth. The previous tricks were fierce and attractive enough, but after leaving the earth, they were very fast and blocked all the tricks. For example, the Tinder directly hit the mosquitoes with a cannon once, and the account was banned, and then a new map was opened to destroy it, suppressing the combat power, and forcibly reducing the protagonist's intelligence in order to overcome the setbacks. To be honest, sometimes I can't even tell who is the protagonist. After the middle period, I start to crazily suppress the protagonist's combat power. Except for the protagonist, the second, third and fourth male characters are not unhappy. In this case, who is the protagonist? I think the author has no ideas when writing novels and has a lot of imagination. The pits he digs are basically done hastily. The most classic one is that he doesn't want to fill it in and just writes it to death. The heroine and daughter are not even useful until more than 600 chapters in the middle. They are just plug-ins. The heroine does nothing but business, and the daughter just misses her father. She pursues cultivation but can't catch up. It's better to delete these two things and skip to the later stage. It seems that the writing is very useful. I speculate that it is better to give the heroine and daughter a big hook to catch up with their progress. This will make the problem even bigger. Who is the protagonist? If it can't be rounded, I write a new map like a Russian matryoshka doll. However, in some places, it is obvious that the author is rushing to make progress. It feels like he has finished writing 50% of the map and opened a new map in a hurry. I don't know if it is because the hole is too big and I am afraid it will not be finished, or because I am tired of writing and want to change the map and continue the same development again. I can still read it with interest once or twice. The problem is that I can only slip away when I see that there is more to come. Matryoshka dolls are not the problem, the problem is that they are frustrating and not fun. On every map, I feel good even if I say I feel good, but I don't feel good even if I say I don't feel good. I am either being hunted or on the way to being chased, and I am forced to change maps. It doesn't mean that you become invincible here and explain the cool points here, and then fly to the next map to accumulate and develop again, but it is very similar to DNF. You finally filled up the magic equipment, but when you opened a new map, everything turned into tatters in an instant. There is also the ending that is too sloppy. Although this is not a problem, because many high-scoring authors also have many bad endings, it is the smallest problem.

I have finished this book. Thank you for your continued tolerance and support. This book has many shortcomings and I have learned a lot. Keep working hard. I hope the next book will be better...

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