[The character names are the female protagonist and her brother, the male protagonist is in Chapter 1]
The little Highness of the Demon Clan is famous for being shameless. Fortunately, he has a higher vision and not many people catch his eye. Otherwise, anyone with a bit of beauty will not be able to escape the clutches of the devil.
The candle dragon god in the heaven is an innocent little dragon who doesn't understand love. He concentrated on practicing and putting down troubles. He was seriously injured while arresting the Sin Immortal, but a girl saved him.
He secretly thought that when the injury heals, he will thank you again. He never thought that the girl would tie him up directly.
He:?
His Majesty's eyes narrowed: "Little beauty, do you want to sleep with me?"
Due to an accident, the young prince passed away to the human world, and he stayed by his side to help others successfully overcome the disaster.
Faced with a girl who was still young and in love, he forced himself to be devoid of desire and put aside the past.
But the little girl got into his bed and said, "Loach, I want to sleep with you."
Him:…
# Pure Love Shy [Expression] Covet beauty and be thick-skinned#
#A love that happens by mistake#
Intention: To love and be loved
Some sentences are a bit hard to read, and the male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist are a bit inexplicable, but the plot is still acceptable.
The writing is okay, but the details are not enough, the characters' personalities are not full enough, there are many typos, the ending is a bit rushed, and many holes are not filled in. But the overall concept is good. If it meets a good screenwriter, it should be able to be made into a good TV series.
The heroine feels very weak, and the fighting scenes are only mentioned in a few strokes (shouldn't fairy novels be rich in writing)? The main plot of the plot is vague and there are many holes left unfilled. At the beginning, I really couldn't tell that the male protagonist liked the female protagonist, but he didn't reject her. Later, the female protagonist solved the love spell and chased his wife in the crematorium (it seems to be), and the character design was okay.
After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. A mess without beginning or end.
It's not too slow to write, but the connection is a bit surprising.
①The heroine's character has changed too much, and the male protagonist is even bigger
②Identity: The plot jumps too quickly. One minute the heroine is the little prince, and the next minute she is the immortal attendant.
The male protagonist is a loach one minute and a candle dragon the next.
③Let's talk about the foreshadowing of the male protagonist's identity. It's not that there is no foreshadowing, but the foreshadowing is too short and too simple. It almost tells you the answer directly, and there is no sense of involvement at all.
④The weak female protagonists are injured almost all the time in the plot. Except for a few who are specially used as stepping stones for the female protagonist, they try hard to create an image of the female protagonist who is not too weak. Almost all the slightly unusual ones can completely abuse the female protagonist.
⑤ Again, the male protagonist. As the only candle dragon, even with the restriction of the exquisite ring, doesn't the male protagonist know his weakness? He is also forced to marry the female protagonist. If the female protagonist is forced to marry the female protagonist, if it is the male protagonist's choice and he also likes the female protagonist, then why do you still pretend to owe him money? Why do you create an image of enduring humiliation in the early stage, being weak and prone to being forced?
⑥The heroine is your little highness. It's okay to serve as a fairy attendant for Zhulong, but is it appropriate to be humiliated by others?
⑦... Forgot
After looking at it for a while, I temporarily picked out a little bit.
It's beautiful. I rarely comment on it, but it's really beautiful.
Emmm... It's a bit hard for me to describe this book. First of all, the introduction of this book says that the female protagonist is Qi Yu (qi second tone, yu second tone) and the male protagonist is the elder brother (Pei Rujing). But if you read the introduction carefully, you will find that the story written at the back is the story of Pei Xian and Qi Yu, because she said that this book contains the content of marriage first and love later. The heroine married Pei Xian at the beginning, so who are the male and female protagonists of this book? Furthermore, I think the content of this book is quite confusing. I feel like I didn't understand the content from the beginning. I hope it can be improved (please don't complain, I have a magic weapon to save my life).
I found the plot particularly appealing to me, even though the storyline didn't feel particularly complete.
Some sentences are a bit hard to read, and the male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist are a bit inexplicable, but the plot is still acceptable.
The writing is okay, but the details are not enough, the characters' personalities are not full enough, there are many typos, the ending is a bit rushed, and many holes are not filled in. But the overall concept is good. If it meets a good screenwriter, it should be able to be made into a good TV series.
The heroine feels very weak, and the fighting scenes are only mentioned in a few strokes (shouldn't fairy novels be rich in writing)? The main plot of the plot is vague and there are many holes left unfilled. At the beginning, I really couldn't tell that the male protagonist liked the female protagonist, but he didn't reject her. Later, the female protagonist solved the love spell and chased his wife in the crematorium (it seems to be), and the character design was okay.
After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. A mess without beginning or end.
It's not too slow to write, but the connection is a bit surprising.
①The heroine's character has changed too much, and the male protagonist is even bigger ②Identity: The plot jumps too quickly. One minute the heroine is the little prince, and the next minute she is the immortal attendant. The male protagonist is a loach one minute and a candle dragon the next. ③Let's talk about the foreshadowing of the male protagonist's identity. It's not that there is no foreshadowing, but the foreshadowing is too short and too simple. It almost tells you the answer directly, and there is no sense of involvement at all. ④The weak female protagonists are injured almost all the time in the plot. Except for a few who are specially used as stepping stones for the female protagonist, they try hard to create an image of the female protagonist who is not too weak. Almost all the slightly unusual ones can completely abuse the female protagonist. ⑤ Again, the male protagonist. As the only candle dragon, even with the restriction of the exquisite ring, doesn't the male protagonist know his weakness? He is also forced to marry the female protagonist. If the female protagonist is forced to marry the female protagonist, if it is the male protagonist's choice and he also likes the female protagonist, then why do you still pretend to owe him money? Why do you create an image of enduring humiliation in the early stage, being weak and prone to being forced? ⑥The heroine is your little highness. It's okay to serve as a fairy attendant for Zhulong, but is it appropriate to be humiliated by others? ⑦... Forgot After looking at it for a while, I temporarily picked out a little bit.
It's beautiful. I rarely comment on it, but it's really beautiful.
Emmm... It's a bit hard for me to describe this book. First of all, the introduction of this book says that the female protagonist is Qi Yu (qi second tone, yu second tone) and the male protagonist is the elder brother (Pei Rujing). But if you read the introduction carefully, you will find that the story written at the back is the story of Pei Xian and Qi Yu, because she said that this book contains the content of marriage first and love later. The heroine married Pei Xian at the beginning, so who are the male and female protagonists of this book? Furthermore, I think the content of this book is quite confusing. I feel like I didn't understand the content from the beginning. I hope it can be improved (please don't complain, I have a magic weapon to save my life).
I found the plot particularly appealing to me, even though the storyline didn't feel particularly complete.
I think it looks good wi