Wear Cheng Xiu N Generation

I saw that when she went to the secret realm for the first time, she ran away with her evil cultivator partner, and she turned around and complained about her partner. If you encounter him, turn around and run away

It's over as of this writing, and there's not even an extra chapter. The ending is too sloppy.

The typos can be ignored, except for the heroine's character changing from time to time, the plot is still good, but the ending is really wordless.

I listened and watched it for three days. I watched the first part very seriously, but the second part was a bit verbose, so I just jumped on it. There are actually quite few emotional scenes. I don't really like stories about big heroines, but I think silly, kind, and cute heroines are good. It's not easy for the author to write, so come on.

Whose novel only reaches the golden elixir stage and then it's over. . The plot was a little confusing and disorderly, and it ended very hastily. There was obviously a heroine going to the Demon Cultivator Continent to recognize her ancestors and improve her bloodline, but it suddenly disappeared, and the ending was very abrupt. Overall it's good, you can take a look. The overall framework of the whole article is pretty good, with various continents and various experiences, but there is always the same demon from the outside world who is hiding in the dark and causing trouble. The villain is still fine in the end and continues to cause trouble. It is over. Many details are mentioned and foreshadowing is laid. Obviously, I can write a lot, and the result is complete. The author may be in a hurry. Many people criticize the heroine's character. I think it's okay. After all, the setting is a heroine who travels through time and has some modern thinking.

How can I put it this way? The content is quite unique, but there are a lot of holes in it that have not been filled in. Lots of typos. It would be nice if it could be re-formatted and some holes fixed. There are no details on whether this book is the first or not.

It's so bad, there are a lot of holes left unfilled.

The writing style is very childish, just like a running account. The problem is not the plot, but the writing style. It feels like the literary talent of a junior high school student. This is why I can't stand it

I always thought that the heroine would gradually become stronger from a novice, but the more I looked at the heroine, the stupider she became.

The author's expressive ability is heartbreaking