The Evil Dragon Robs the Husband of the Dragon and Is Too Insidious

The characters are vividly portrayed, and the overall structure of the story is unique, novel, and rich.

How should I put it? The ending was unexpected. The heroine's behavior is something I rarely see in other novels. The ending is a bit too fast. Overall, it's good.

The ups and downs are exciting, but the ending is too little written. Fortunately, the ending is good.

Disapproval means not thinking it is correct It should be "not concerned"

I feel like the author has used too many commas. Like this: I feel like the author has used too many commas. Use commas where there is no need to use commas. It looks a bit weird.