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One thunderstorm night, a girl came to Luochuan's house.
The girl said that she came from 2079 AD and was a security inspector of the Special Security Bureau. She accidentally came here to arrest criminals who broke into the time and space stream.
Of course Luochuan didn't believe it.
But the girl didn't know how to act, so she lifted him above her head.
Luochuan: "???"
After that night, Luochuan began to live with the future girl.
While getting along, Luochuan discovered many of her secrets...
He likes to curl up in a ball when sleeping, has incredible strength, and eats as much as three people, especially meat...
What surprised Luo Chuan the most was that the girl brought a mobile phone that could subvert the technology of this era.
At this point, Luochuan's originally ordinary life began.
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Many years later, when Luochuan stood on the 906th floor of Yunduan City and looked at the sky, he would always think of the distant night when he picked up Mo Yuhan.
[Easy daily life] [Drama life] [Business career]
Many novels have this common problem, that is, their titles and contents are very different. When many people read the title of the book, the first thing they thought of was the relationship between the male and female protagonists. However, there were very few interactions between the two, and the love process was not outstanding. After reading it, I only remembered that the female protagonist was strong and had a big appetite, which was pitiful. There were too few other descriptions. On the contrary, there are many descriptions of the male protagonist, like a "dumb-headed young man" who goes against capital, has principles and plans in doing things, etc.! In a nutshell, this is not the title of the book.
The other thing is the history of struggle, but the struggle process is too little, and the results are many, especially in the early stage, it feels like you will become a millionaire as soon as you wake up.
In the early stage, it was a fast-food and refreshing novel, but in the later period, the style of painting changed... The description is too pale, but it is still remarkable as a first book, at least it is better than those tacky suit articles, and you still need to work harder!
In fact, it's really good-looking. I think it would be even better if I added a little sweet text. First, there are too few emotional intersections between the male and female protagonists. A few strokes are not enough to portray the depth of the emotions between the male and female protagonists, and the language expression of the novel is slightly pale. Second, the current novel focuses on life and career, but this novel does not reflect the highlights in this aspect. Thirdly, the writing style of a new work by a newcomer is inevitably a bit immature, and the plot details and other aspects are not satisfactory to me and other veteran readers. It needs to be more vivid and vivid, so that everyone can understand it. In the end, I think this book was well written, and I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch.
Overall: a good urban light novel
Let's talk about the plot first: ① Category of work: It has the feel of an authentic light novel, and it doesn't look very boring. It is above average. It is a relatively good light novel. It can be regarded as a fine product in this category.
②Basic plot: The protagonist picks up a wife from the future, and then starts a "normal" daily life. Except for the plot that the family likes (of course it is the plot of LSP, but it is understandable that it has to be reviewed after all), the rest is okay. After reading it, there is not much fault. ③Some of my own opinions (don't criticize if you don't like it, for reference only): I don't understand Tang Yan's part, it feels a bit useless, and it doesn't have much push for the subsequent plot. Of course, I don't rule out the possibility that the rest of the story hasn't been released yet (you may be plotting some more interesting plots if you want to do it yourself) and because the male protagonist failed to protect the female protagonist, he took the female protagonist to the place where he had his first date with his first love to yell and vent his emotions. It's a bit magical. After all, which girl nowadays would care about her boyfriend's memories of her first love. It's a bit too dramatic (I don't quite understand it, maybe I'm different from normal people)
Then let's talk about the writing style: How do I put this paragraph? After all, we are writers and we must have a certain cultural background, so it is not a boring read. It is quite acceptable and I agree with it. Of course, there are also typos, but this is an Internet article, and typos are common.
Finally, let me talk about my evaluation of this book and other miscellaneous things: First of all, I feel that the plot is a bit like "My Wife Came from a Thousand Years Ago", except that one is from the past and the other is from the future, both of which are to teach the heroine to live in modern society (I don't know which came first, so I don't have any disapproval of the author's works. After all, every writer does not want his work to be labeled as plagiarism. Please bear with me if I am offended. D(ŐдŐ๑) ) After that, this type of article is generally not easy to write. After all, if you keep writing about ordinary daily life without ups and downs, it will be said to be a running account. But if you don't write about daily life, it will be said to be out of subject. It can be said to be a bit difficult, but after all, everything is difficult at the beginning, and the author has made a good start. I hope the author will write it seriously and not be piggy (>ω<). Then let me talk about some thoughts on the subsequent plot of this book: First of all, the author mentioned the heroine in the introduction The male protagonist will definitely be together in the end, so it shouldn't be too sad. Then, I have some opinions on the ending: First, they really grew old together until 2079, but the previous foreshadowing, such as the earth's earthquake, the reduction of water resources, etc., Are not easy to write. After all, it is a bit difficult to have these plots in an urban daily light novel. If it doesn't work, you can learn from the next door "Fu Er Zhang San" or "My Girlfriend Comes from APP", which is also possible Finally, I hope that the plot can be maintained. As long as there are no big mistakes, it should be able to become famous and become a niche treasure. It is said that the industry has been in a downturn recently, but if it becomes popular in the future, it will be my fault, so please bear with me! (ﾟDisﾟ)) In the end, there is not much to say: I just hope the author will write well, come on (๑><๑)
Looking at the author's profile, it seems that we have to go back to 2079? I am very curious about how to write this, because it is actually difficult to write this kind of urban daily article without cheats. I hope the ending will be happy. There are not many words at the moment, but it looks good. I hope it will be more sweet, less cruel, and more flirty. It has been well received!
I like this kind of book very much. It doesn't always pretend to be cool, nor does it have the whole world surrounding the protagonist. It doesn't make me want to pounce on a woman when I see it. In short, I like it very much, but the updates are a bit slow!
The book is very good, this is the first time I read this kind of plot, but is the update a bit slow? How many times a day? Does anyone know?
Many novels have this common problem, that is, their titles and contents are very different. When many people read the title of the book, the first thing they thought of was the relationship between the male and female protagonists. However, there were very few interactions between the two, and the love process was not outstanding. After reading it, I only remembered that the female protagonist was strong and had a big appetite, which was pitiful. There were too few other descriptions. On the contrary, there are many descriptions of the male protagonist, like a "dumb-headed young man" who goes against capital, has principles and plans in doing things, etc.! In a nutshell, this is not the title of the book. The other thing is the history of struggle, but the struggle process is too little, and the results are many, especially in the early stage, it feels like you will become a millionaire as soon as you wake up. In the early stage, it was a fast-food and refreshing novel, but in the later period, the style of painting changed... The description is too pale, but it is still remarkable as a first book, at least it is better than those tacky suit articles, and you still need to work harder!
In fact, it's really good-looking. I think it would be even better if I added a little sweet text. First, there are too few emotional intersections between the male and female protagonists. A few strokes are not enough to portray the depth of the emotions between the male and female protagonists, and the language expression of the novel is slightly pale. Second, the current novel focuses on life and career, but this novel does not reflect the highlights in this aspect. Thirdly, the writing style of a new work by a newcomer is inevitably a bit immature, and the plot details and other aspects are not satisfactory to me and other veteran readers. It needs to be more vivid and vivid, so that everyone can understand it. In the end, I think this book was well written, and I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch.
Overall: a good urban light novel Let's talk about the plot first: ① Category of work: It has the feel of an authentic light novel, and it doesn't look very boring. It is above average. It is a relatively good light novel. It can be regarded as a fine product in this category. ②Basic plot: The protagonist picks up a wife from the future, and then starts a "normal" daily life. Except for the plot that the family likes (of course it is the plot of LSP, but it is understandable that it has to be reviewed after all), the rest is okay. After reading it, there is not much fault. ③Some of my own opinions (don't criticize if you don't like it, for reference only): I don't understand Tang Yan's part, it feels a bit useless, and it doesn't have much push for the subsequent plot. Of course, I don't rule out the possibility that the rest of the story hasn't been released yet (you may be plotting some more interesting plots if you want to do it yourself) and because the male protagonist failed to protect the female protagonist, he took the female protagonist to the place where he had his first date with his first love to yell and vent his emotions. It's a bit magical. After all, which girl nowadays would care about her boyfriend's memories of her first love. It's a bit too dramatic (I don't quite understand it, maybe I'm different from normal people) Then let's talk about the writing style: How do I put this paragraph? After all, we are writers and we must have a certain cultural background, so it is not a boring read. It is quite acceptable and I agree with it. Of course, there are also typos, but this is an Internet article, and typos are common. Finally, let me talk about my evaluation of this book and other miscellaneous things: First of all, I feel that the plot is a bit like "My Wife Came from a Thousand Years Ago", except that one is from the past and the other is from the future, both of which are to teach the heroine to live in modern society (I don't know which came first, so I don't have any disapproval of the author's works. After all, every writer does not want his work to be labeled as plagiarism. Please bear with me if I am offended. D(ŐдŐ๑) ) After that, this type of article is generally not easy to write. After all, if you keep writing about ordinary daily life without ups and downs, it will be said to be a running account. But if you don't write about daily life, it will be said to be out of subject. It can be said to be a bit difficult, but after all, everything is difficult at the beginning, and the author has made a good start. I hope the author will write it seriously and not be piggy (>ω<). Then let me talk about some thoughts on the subsequent plot of this book: First of all, the author mentioned the heroine in the introduction The male protagonist will definitely be together in the end, so it shouldn't be too sad. Then, I have some opinions on the ending: First, they really grew old together until 2079, but the previous foreshadowing, such as the earth's earthquake, the reduction of water resources, etc., Are not easy to write. After all, it is a bit difficult to have these plots in an urban daily light novel. If it doesn't work, you can learn from the next door "Fu Er Zhang San" or "My Girlfriend Comes from APP", which is also possible Finally, I hope that the plot can be maintained. As long as there are no big mistakes, it should be able to become famous and become a niche treasure. It is said that the industry has been in a downturn recently, but if it becomes popular in the future, it will be my fault, so please bear with me! (ﾟDisﾟ)) In the end, there is not much to say: I just hope the author will write well, come on (๑><๑)
Looking at the author's profile, it seems that we have to go back to 2079? I am very curious about how to write this, because it is actually difficult to write this kind of urban daily article without cheats. I hope the ending will be happy. There are not many words at the moment, but it looks good. I hope it will be more sweet, less cruel, and more flirty. It has been well received!
I like this kind of book very much. It doesn't always pretend to be cool, nor does it have the whole world surrounding the protagonist. It doesn't make me want to pounce on a woman when I see it. In short, I like it very much, but the updates are a bit slow!
The book is very good, this is the first time I read this kind of plot, but is the update a bit slow? How many times a day? Does anyone know?