This Text-Based Immortality Game Is About Krypton Life

The game and reality are interconnected. I loved watching it, but it's a pity that it ended early.

It's a pity that the author didn't write it down, but it was actually quite good.

It's a very good novel, but it's a pity that it's so unfinished that it was gone in a few hours.

The subject matter is pretty good, and the early writing was okay, but it's a pity that it's unfinished. Not even out of Novice Village. I wrote about four realms in the early stage, but after forcing it to the second realm, I cut it.

It's so well written, why don't you continue writing? It's so uncomfortable to call it a day.

I was confused later on. It's amazing that the author could even insist on finishing the general plot.

You can watch the front part, but the end part feels very rushed and a bit unfinished.

It's very interesting, but because of the poor results, it was unfinished.

Your writing is good, but I can't give you a high rating because you've only written 400,000 words and not many people have read it before giving up. No matter how good your writing is, don't write anymore because it will deceive readers. 400,000 Words is basically just the beginning. Except for great writers with many fans, few writers will have good results. After all, you won't have many old fans just by writing this few words. Even if you have a few fans, they won't pay attention to you anymore after seeing the eunuch-like ending of 400,000 words. Anyway, the last few chapters were very confusing and gave me a bit of brain congestion. I've obviously just started practicing practice, eh~

It's still very good, compared to those opening games that require you to step on the ground and rub against the ground. It's just that the ending is a bit hasty. I guess it's because less people are watching it and it's relatively niche, so the author ended it in a hurry.