Ye Xuan traveled through time, possessed the body of the great emperor, slept in an ancient bronze coffin, and drifted in the universe.
When the ancient coffin was opened, what came into view were seven unparalleled beautiful disciples who captivated the country and the city.
Therefore, Ye Xuan chose to live peacefully in this world and train seven female disciples.
First Disciple: The Unparalleled Empress!
Second Disciple: Peerless Sword God!
Third Disciple: Fairy Piaomiao!
A few years later, seven female disciples dominated all parties and were invincible in the world.
They all said: "Compared to Master, we are not one ten thousandth!"
Can you please stop writing so many descriptions on those female protagonists? It's obvious that they are watery.
Zhen Neng Shui has one meaning that can be interpreted in many different ways. How do you understand it when writing poetry? It makes sense but doesn't make sense. It's disgusting and people forcefully pretend to be cool. If you don't know how to write a title, don't write it. I thought it was something good to read. I thought I could read it without using my brain. I didn't expect that the more I read, the more stupid I become. I can't stand it anymore.
Update soon. What's going on?
1. It's no brainer. You started with the body of an emperor, and you used the energy of your golden elixir to temper your body. I'm convinced.
2. The villain forcibly reduces his intelligence, and the protagonist forcibly pretends to be cool.
3. Every time I do something, someone always interrupts me, which is disgusting.
A sentence should be repeated several times. The story is okay, but the writing is not very smooth.
There are many typos and the order is wrong. I didn't feel good after reading it for a long time.
Forty-six: Three hundred miles from the Demon Desire Gate, the last three thousand miles can only be written by a master
She is simply sick, even if she has no cultivation, she still has the body of a great emperor. In the eyes of others, she is just a scum of Qi refiners. She is forced to use intelligence to ridicule, and slaps her in the face in the same way. It's disgusting.
Brother, I finally finished competing with those ancestors. I'm going crazy.
Lots of typos and lots of things mixed up
Can you please stop writing so many descriptions on those female protagonists? It's obvious that they are watery.
Zhen Neng Shui has one meaning that can be interpreted in many different ways. How do you understand it when writing poetry? It makes sense but doesn't make sense. It's disgusting and people forcefully pretend to be cool. If you don't know how to write a title, don't write it. I thought it was something good to read. I thought I could read it without using my brain. I didn't expect that the more I read, the more stupid I become. I can't stand it anymore.
Update soon. What's going on?
1. It's no brainer. You started with the body of an emperor, and you used the energy of your golden elixir to temper your body. I'm convinced. 2. The villain forcibly reduces his intelligence, and the protagonist forcibly pretends to be cool. 3. Every time I do something, someone always interrupts me, which is disgusting.
A sentence should be repeated several times. The story is okay, but the writing is not very smooth.
There are many typos and the order is wrong. I didn't feel good after reading it for a long time.
Forty-six: Three hundred miles from the Demon Desire Gate, the last three thousand miles can only be written by a master
She is simply sick, even if she has no cultivation, she still has the body of a great emperor. In the eyes of others, she is just a scum of Qi refiners. She is forced to use intelligence to ridicule, and slaps her in the face in the same way. It's disgusting.
Brother, I finally finished competing with those ancestors. I'm going crazy.