[Sweet pet] + [Single heroine] + [Healing] + [Two-way running] + [Daily] + [Jianghu]
Luo Heng traveled through a female channel novel and formed a destined marriage with the villain in the book, the Devil.
He read at night by candlelight, and her red sleeves added fragrance.
He hangs his penis and stabs her buttocks, while she holds a spoon in her bare hands.
She danced gracefully, and he played the piano to accompany her.
She is unparalleled in beauty, and he is a gentleman.
He vowed to use the greatest tenderness to heal the trauma in her heart.
One year later.
The protagonist group comes to visit.
Facing the aggressive protagonist group, they vow to "kill evil and eliminate demons".
This time, Luo Heng will never say "Madam, run", but... Madam, let's go together!
The initial setting was good, but it became more and more chaotic as it went on. After building the foundation two or three times, it felt a bit like someone else had written it.
Plain and boring, a bit petty
From the beginning, I wrote about the protagonist reading to get cheats, but then he stopped reading at all and didn't get any rewards. Also, this topic, except for the beginning, I feel that the protagonist only regards the heroine as his subordinate. The writing is biased. How many readers have you attracted with this topic? Click here to see them all Write about the chaos of home and country, whoever reads it, or change the title. The beginning and end really fit the title, and the middle process is not important. What kind of psychological author are you? No matter how profound the things you write, what is the use of being educated? The name is not worthy of the title. The whole article is written in this style. Isn't it boring to write it?
The plot advances too slowly, and there is too little excitement. Momojiji, the story that could have been told in four or five hundred chapters was dragged out to over 1,000 chapters by you.
After more than 90 chapters, the combat power collapsed. The first-rate crossed the border and defeated two grandmasters with elite cavalry? ? ?
There are too many inexplicable descriptions, which is embarrassing.
If it's not about love, I might as well change the title of the book. It's not worthy.
Such beautiful writing, I haven't read it enough and I don't know what will happen next.
Is there anyone out there who skips the love scenes like me and only watches the fights?
When I read Chapter 104, I didn't want to read it anymore. It was said before that Xuanwu gave the evidence bill to the prince, and the prince handed it to the emperor. The emperor said it was no big deal. But in chapter 104, when Xuanwu died, you told me that the evidence bill was still on Xuanwu. Can you continue reading because of the inconsistency?
I have read countless novels where the protagonist will find a reason every time he kills someone. It seems that the protagonist in the novel is always on the side of justice and everyone who is killed has a damning reason. It's hypocritical.
The initial setting was good, but it became more and more chaotic as it went on. After building the foundation two or three times, it felt a bit like someone else had written it.
Plain and boring, a bit petty
From the beginning, I wrote about the protagonist reading to get cheats, but then he stopped reading at all and didn't get any rewards. Also, this topic, except for the beginning, I feel that the protagonist only regards the heroine as his subordinate. The writing is biased. How many readers have you attracted with this topic? Click here to see them all Write about the chaos of home and country, whoever reads it, or change the title. The beginning and end really fit the title, and the middle process is not important. What kind of psychological author are you? No matter how profound the things you write, what is the use of being educated? The name is not worthy of the title. The whole article is written in this style. Isn't it boring to write it?
The plot advances too slowly, and there is too little excitement. Momojiji, the story that could have been told in four or five hundred chapters was dragged out to over 1,000 chapters by you.
After more than 90 chapters, the combat power collapsed. The first-rate crossed the border and defeated two grandmasters with elite cavalry? ? ? There are too many inexplicable descriptions, which is embarrassing.
If it's not about love, I might as well change the title of the book. It's not worthy.
Such beautiful writing, I haven't read it enough and I don't know what will happen next.
Is there anyone out there who skips the love scenes like me and only watches the fights?
When I read Chapter 104, I didn't want to read it anymore. It was said before that Xuanwu gave the evidence bill to the prince, and the prince handed it to the emperor. The emperor said it was no big deal. But in chapter 104, when Xuanwu died, you told me that the evidence bill was still on Xuanwu. Can you continue reading because of the inconsistency?
I have read countless novels where the protagonist will find a reason every time he kills someone. It seems that the protagonist in the novel is always on the side of justice and everyone who is killed has a damning reason. It's hypocritical.