Travel Through the Book to Become a Villain, and Marry the Protagonist's Mother-In-Law at the Beginning

The plot is a bit unreasonable, and it always feels a bit strange.

What the hell is that written about? Lots of typos. What does "Grandmaster" mean?

The combat power collapsed, the grandmaster was injured by a gangster, what kind of rubbish combat power, and the character of the protagonist also collapsed later.

I feel that Qin Hui's paragraph is not very reasonable. Why would a traitor become a traitor? It is because it is profitable. So what is the benefit of Qin Hui helping Qian Yilin? Since there is no benefit, there is no need for Qin Hui to help Qian Yilin. After all, this kind of thing is despised. Who would want to do it if there is no profit?

Just asking, how old is the author [smile]

Is the update discontinued? Or did I not load it?

Is this be or he?

The supporting characters are too insane to write

I added a map and put it in Chapter 6.

Let's open a supporting building here. All book friends, please help me think of the name of the supporting building. I can't think of it by myself.