Three Hundred Years of Cultivating the Dao in the Mortal World

After reading twenty chapters, I feel that Li Bai has a lot of people's support on him. It seems that the first two sentences are also suitable in terms of artistic conception, but it is a pity that they cannot support the charm of the last two sentences.

Didn't it mean that it's a thousand miles away? It'll be here in four hours?

Is it over????? Where are three hundred years?

It looks great, I admire it and love watching it

Just read Chapter 24. It's logical and thoughtful, but I feel like the plot is a bit too long. From the yamen to the truth coming out, it takes more than 20 chapters. I only passed a plot point after watching it all night. Will it be better in the future? I hope the author will update it.

Of course, benevolence sees benevolence, and the wise see wisdom. This means that one can pursue the Tao throughout one's life regardless of the date of return, and one's belief in suppressing immortals and exterminating demons is unwavering, but it also implies freedom and ease.

Therefore, I feel that this modern poem is not very consistent with the sword fairy Li Bai. The whole poem is still filled with a touch of sadness and vicissitudes, and it is not free and easy.

The first two sentences are quite tragic. The questions are endless, and the demons are endlessly slain. The feeling does not reflect the free and heroic temperament of slaying immortals and demons with swords. The farther the road to seek the truth is, the slaying of immortals and demons is endless. This is somewhat in line with the scene in "Perfect World" where the road is cut off, strange invasions, and slaying demons are endless.

I can only say that this is a very artistic statement, but it is still far inferior as a poem. I checked AI by the way. From a strict analysis, these four sentences do not constitute a complete poem that meets the requirements of traditional meter. It is more like a prose poem with profound artistic conception and strong emotions. Rhythmically, these four lines of poetry do not follow the rules of alternating straight and oblique lines and neat contrasts. Although the number of words in each sentence is similar, the level and rhyme are not consistent, and the contrast is not precise enough. In terms of content, these four lines of poetry depict a heroic image of a sword-wielding man who asks questions and slays demons, and at the same time praises someone's noble and flawless character like three layers of snow. The artistic conception is profound and full of emotion, but it lacks the implicitness and charm of traditional poetry. But it still has certain literary value and artistic charm, and can arouse readers' resonance and thinking. In modern literature, such a poem can be regarded as an innovative way of expression

It's beautiful. I really like this kind of subject.