The First Warlord

The writing and plot are good, but there are too many typos. Looked confused.

There are too many missing words and typos, and some sentences cannot be read clearly.

Silly bitches ran away, pig feet went crazy, what else could they do in ancient times?

They keep saying that a pistol cannot fire continuously without a spring. I would like to ask, does a revolver need a spring? Aren't the gears turning continuously?

There are too many typos, the names are often spelled out, and the pinyin of the writing is not good, just give a rough look.

This can also be rated, what the hell?

This author can do it. If you change some places, you can stand shoulder to shoulder with Tomato, San Shao, and Potato. I hope to do better in the future