I Forge Eternal Life with the Dao Seed

Brothers, the frivolous new book has been updated. I changed my account and updated it. It is almost a million words long. Everyone is welcome to read it!

You give me the feeling that you are nothing, and reading your novels is not worth the money. I see you spent several hundred yuan on your Taoist dice. Anyway, I feel like I don't want to spend any money on your novels from now on.

This is the identity of the protagonist, right? If Liu Hong were not the protagonist, he would not be dead. He would have been killed a long time ago. He himself is better than you. In addition, his sword skills have improved so much, his speed is faster than you, and his strength has improved so much. He can't kill you. If you don't run away, if the identity of the protagonist is reversed, he will probably die long ago. The protagonist knows that if he vomits blood, he will not die. He also says that he is a dog and still goes out every time he knows there is danger. Does this have anything to do with being a dog?

Alas, for the sake of the plot, I forcefully subdue my wits.

Great. Accepted by the author.

Also, was the author Osha eliminated by Zhao Heng?

There should be betrayers among the five generals, and the leader of Zhenwu should have been assassinated!

The logic is confusing, the practice is fast sometimes and slow sometimes, I don't know what I want to express. The plot is not well arranged. Since there is a Star Alliance, enemies outside the stars, and such an awesome boss, why are they fighting back and forth instead of directly unifying the Southern Territory? I wanted to create some big layout and conspiracy, but I couldn't do it well, so it was better to be more plain and make it very confusing.

No wonder no one read it, I felt it after reading more than 200 chapters. The plot is like a pile of mud

The detour is too far, as if the author ran around the city three times before venting his breath.