As Soon as I Traveled Through Time, the Most Powerful Man Forced Me to Have a Bridal Chamber

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Just write it according to the author's own imagination of cultivating immortality. The introduction is very clear and the writing is very good. I will always support you!

Just when I was listening with great enthusiasm, it stopped. What is this thing you wrote! ! ! Harmful things!

If this book is not very good, why not update it?

Dear author, this article is very well written. Why is it not updated? The protagonist needs to grow up, either slowly or quickly. The author can just follow his own ideas. You don't need to pay attention to some comments because there are people who really support you. You need to think about us who support you. We are all looking forward to the follow-up of the novel.

This protagonist is the same as that idiot. He is simply the most idiot among idiots. Even looking at me, I want to beat him up.

Great author, hold on, don't be a eunuch

These chapters are quite interesting. It's better to write around female characters.

From the beginning, the plot is a bit too procrastinating. I spent a long time just trying to write about how the male and female protagonists give to each other, but the shaping of the female protagonist has not yet begun. If a character who has not yet fallen in love with the reader does these things, it will not make people feel that the love is deep and meaningful, but will only feel that the meaning is unclear. Well-shaped characters can move people by doing this, but trying to move readers right from the beginning is really a mistake. It is not even as interesting as letting two people cultivate together.

The description is a bit embarrassing. When it comes to the words about the iceberg girl's eyes, I didn't realize how beautiful it is.