Death's Sword and Two Souls

Exchange visits! ! ! The sword has been passed down through the ages with the industry, and the sword can split the world in troubled times. The spear moves vertically and horizontally like a dot of ink, and the stick sweeps down the demons in all directions. The steel whip that subdues demons shakes the five mountains, and the halberd is opened in two months and thousands of enemies are attacked. The ax sweeps the world like a whirlwind, and the hook cuts off all impermanent karma and eliminates it. The ax shook the eight directions and leveled the nine continents, hammering the sky and thundering on the earth. From then on, no one was lucky enough in the world. The warrior of all ages came to visit me with his works "Four Worlds of Sky", "Xia Feng Zhan Ying", "World Chaos Tribulation", and "World Chaos Tribulation Online Game Scam". My writing skills are a bit weak, and there are still many shortcomings. I hope that all the masters will come to guide, visit and help each other, and give you advice. I am very grateful...

800,000, It feels so fast

Good book, already collected, would you like to receive it from each other? "Changing the Song Dynasty"

Come here to read the excellent work. It has been collected. I hope the author will pay you a return visit and learn from each other.

The first half of the internal fighting among the nobles is the most reasonable arrangement I have ever seen in a fan. The second half of the internal drama version is too Akaashi, and the plot after the return is even more messy. In addition, the AI ​​has to adjust various minor errors.

The plot was pretty good at the beginning, but when I was writing the theatrical version, I was all over the place and traveling through time and space, completely unable to control the plot, and in the end it got worse and worse.

The rhythm of the whole book, from my personal point of view, started to get messy after writing the plot of the theatrical version. Anyway, it's better than most Bleach fanfics.

Fully support the masterpiece and make your "Death of Swords and Two Souls" more and more exciting, big deal!

I really like Yoichi, the big sister in black stockings!