After transmigrating to the Great Liang Dynasty three years ago, Li Yan had planned to slack off and spend his days as a useless Crown Prince, living like a carefree fish.
Who could have guessed that his father, the emperor, would listen to his poisonous concubine's slander and sentence him to death on trumped-up charges?
In his fury, Li Yan awakened the Goddess Summoning System. Sign in to win a prize, and resist rebellion to summon heroines from every dynasty!
Summon Empress Wu Zetian, and a hundred thousand Divine Might troops descend!
The assassin queen Chi Lian, red lotuses flowing, with the Web reaching the heavens!
The female Martial Saint Hua Mulan opens the Heavenly Gate and cleaves immortals with her sword!
Summon the Three Xiao Sisters, the Martial Goddess Nine Heavens Mysterious Maiden...
Then Li Yan led his army of beauties, with a million soldiers surrounding Chang'an, shaking the whole nation...
"Father, I only wanted to be a lazy, carefree fish. Why did you have to force me into rebellion?"
I don't understand how it is not a rebellion but to defend the country and secure the world, and then it ends in an anticlimax.
I didn't know this novel could be written with such ink.
Here you feel more comfortable writing about the Prince of Zhennan than the Crown Prince, because your wording is weird.
There are also all kinds of strange words used, such as here
This is not a good beginning, the kind that dissuades readers.