The Rise of Machine Weapons

Seventy is too early. 82 Is the beginning of your story

The guy is so polite

The description of the purchase price of spiritual power is too rough and casual. Why is the purchase price not explained?

If after more than two hundred chapters it wasn't almost the same as the background plot of Devouring, it might be better. Also, there are really many typos.

Exchange visits! ! ! The sword has been passed down through the ages with the industry, and the sword can split the world in troubled times. The spear moves vertically and horizontally like a dot of ink, and the stick sweeps down the demons in all directions. The steel whip that subdues demons shakes the five mountains, and the halberd is opened in two months and thousands of enemies are attacked. The ax sweeps the world like a whirlwind, and the hook cuts off all impermanent karma and eliminates it. The ax shook the eight directions and leveled the nine continents, hammering the sky and thundering on the earth. From then on, no one was lucky enough in the world. The warrior of all ages came to visit me with his works "Four Universes in the Sky", "Xia Feng Zhan Ying", "The World's Chaos" and "The World's Chaos: Online Game Scam". My writing skills are a bit weak, and there are still many shortcomings. I hope that all the masters will come to guide, visit and help each other, and give you advice. I am very grateful...

There seems to be some weird stuff mixed into the good mecha text.

The rise of the brainless female protagonist + the brainless male protagonist

It looks good so far and I hope the author will continue writing.

Looks good so far