My Deskmate Is So Shy? Dote on Her Long Enough and She'll Come Around

I still get bullied all the time even though I have a system, the writing is wrong

The writing level needs to be improved, I can't even put it into perspective. I also write sweet stories. Look at Monk, Pu Xian, Meng Qingxuan, etc. They are so sweet that my aunt laughed.

The more we feed the drunkards, the more they can't feed them enough, and they gamble and lose all their money.

Guitars should be held by boys. Wouldn't it be troublesome for girls to take them home? Wouldn't a drunkard exchange the guitar for money?

It's too exciting, system + rebirth. That's it…

It sounds like something is written, but the donkey's head is wrong and the horse's mouth is wrong.

The hero's parents were written so well at the beginning, but they are like this later. I really don't know what's going on in your head.

There is a system written like this

There is a system that abuses you so much. Stop writing about the system.