I Found a Treasure. the Rough Guy in the Mountains Is a Real Boss.

My literary skills are not very good! The flowing articles, especially the chapter describing the picturesque longing for Xiaoyun, are like chewing wax! There are many typos and missing words! There is no abandonment, the article is relatively short and has a happy ending! I don't know the reason for the high rating?

The heroine is a bit pretentious and a bit unclear! Don't you feel very moved when you go looking for your husband with a belly that is about to give birth? I think I'm looking for death. I'm about to give birth, the road is bumpy, there's war and there are refugees. Isn't it easy to get into trouble in such a situation? It is very easy to kill two people. Is this something you can do willfully?

Some of them look a little boring, but overall they look pretty good.

The main thing is that I am speechless. I want to conquer the world but not sit in the world. Why don't I become the king? I don't think about my son at all.

Overall, it's pretty good. I might have been a little anxious, but there were a lot of typos and there were also some wrong pronouns in the paragraphs. The plot was pretty complete.

There are too many illogical parts in the article. When I read Chapter 84, I found that I couldn't stand it anymore. Abandoned.

The time-traveling girl in this book has no golden fingers. She is too ordinary. How could she meet such a good male protagonist?

The heroine's mother can still keep the bride price

Fine. No golden fingers, ordinary happiness.

I don't like the heroine, she's very pretentious, and she can't do anything without the hero.