Nine Stunning Senior Sisters, All Kinds of Charms

The more you listen to your writing, the more breathless you become. If you look like you can't write, then don't write.

Is there something wrong with Xie Qi's head?

Your head is squeezed by the door. A practitioner is afraid of a young man. The younger brothers all learn kung fu from the senior sister.

Use other book frames and slightly modify them?

The author's language is not without fault, and while it's not great, the book is very, very bad to read. A little suggestion for the author, you must understand why a good routine is so good. You have stirred up the reader's anger, and it feels good to release it, but I don't think the author understands what's going on. For example, in the first story, the fourth senior sister comes and goes with one move. I got into trouble—Junior brother solves it—Junior brother, did he get into bigger trouble? No, I have to send him away and find someone to have a relationship with—the trouble is even bigger. This is a fixed routine of Shuangwen, but it cannot be used like this. Others use a short paragraph and quickly release it. The relationship between the senior sister and the protagonist warms up, and then they go to solve other problems. You haven't raised the temperature at all. I don't feel that she has a good relationship with her junior brother at all. They don't trust each other at all, so what's the point of having a good relationship? The senior sister doesn't think that her junior brother is very powerful, but if he just wants to build relationships and cause trouble, he can go back and forth seven or eight times. Junior brother is also a swindler. He doesn't care about her causing trouble. If you tie her up and show her your combat power, tokens, and reportedly tens of billions of assets, how can she cause trouble again? Although this routine is originally like this, you can't write it in such a protracted and stupid way. I didn't feel happy at all. I just felt that these four senior sisters were really a scam. And the senior sister's family was able to write chapter 160 from the beginning. This family even planned to send the senior sister to the old man's bed. How do you release the anger that readers have built up for so long? Pretending to be a slap in the face just feels good when you release it, but you have accumulated more than a hundred chapters, how much of a dick do you have to pretend to be? Even if Senior Sister and her whole family kneel down, I don't think it will be enough to overcome all the mentally retarded things in front of you. You haven't pretended yet in the end. Shuang didn't see it, but he saw that any passerby passing by could criticize the protagonist. It's not difficult to write this routine. Don't keep putting it off. After the senior sister gets into trouble once or twice, she should know the basics of the protagonist. Anyway, it's not just the senior sister who writes so many female characters. You also worry about finding new fools to send them. After you have a new fool, the senior sister comes to say a few words of trust. Isn't this image much more comfortable? If you can make the first heroine of this story so annoying, it will definitely fail.

Can you guys reply to me? What did his senior sister learn?

Why don't his other eight senior sisters believe in him? What did his senior sister and his master learn? Are they prostitutes?

It's a bunch of defense, it's ugly and boring.

I don't understand these 4 senior sisters. She just believes whatever others say.

After reading the first ten chapters, I found that the character creation was problematic, disgusting, and fruitless.