The Blade Rises

I've written about one-fifth of the story about an adventure, and it's nothing new. It's so verbose that it would be great if someone had the patience to read it. In short, it is not suitable for watching refreshing plots.

It doesn't look good, the writing is messy

I have read a few chapters. To be honest, those who have read Perfect World have almost no desire to read the first few chapters.

The age in the early stage is too young. I should write it as a teenager. This would be more appropriate.

The brain is a good thing. He can kill and hunt at the age of five.

It's so nonsense. It's not breathtaking at all at the beginning. I can't stand it.

You wrote the protagonist too young.

He is already awesome at the age of 6! Childish books

Am I the only one who feels like a perfect world?

Starting with a six-year-old protagonist, how long does it take to make him mature? Anyway, I gave up after reading a few chapters. I don't think he will mature until he matures. The naivety of logic can be seen from this point: a six-year-old kid who just started practicing can actually fight an adult killer to death. Hehe