Coax Branches

I read the book a year ago, I feel like I've long forgotten about it, but it's still good

I haven't even read half of it (a lot of content later is fast-forwarded + skipped) and I decided to abandon the article ~ A few days ago, I searched for a few books on 7️⃣Mao. Then I started searching everywhere for interesting articles. I really made myself laugh when I saw this one... It is reasonable to suspect that the author lacked experience when writing this article because the overall writing style is very childish. Tell yourself that when reading novels, you don't need to pay too much attention to the author's portrayal of the character's profession. It doesn't matter if there are discrepancies or flaws. But the plot and writing style of this book are also unflattering... The first part is also a regular sweet story routine. In fact, in this kind of subject matter, the plot and common popular jokes are just those. No matter how innovative it is, it will not be interesting... In this case, I personally think that the author's writing power is very important. How a storyteller tells a story and the way he presents it determines whether the story is mature or not. But personally, I don't like the author's writing style. Too many rhetorical stacks and redundant language will not show that the writing is good, but it will use too much force... The description of the male and female protagonists is too cumbersome. I have been constantly emphasizing that the male protagonist is "the flower of the high mountains" and so on. I have spent a lot of pen and ink describing the appearance and demeanor. I feel like I am trying to make up the number of words. In the early stage, it was normal. After reading it, I just feel that the male protagonist is very oily... The female protagonist is also extremely childish... Emotionally, the male and female protagonists are completely awkward and sweet. The female protagonist keeps saying "you, you, you" and the male protagonist also falls in love with her out of nowhere. When I saw the word [chatGPT] appearing directly in the comment area of an article with a screenshot taken by a reader, I can always understand why some parts of this article gave me a strong smell of love...

26.4.26. Ordinary and simple happiness

The plot is very blunt, and the plot relies entirely on the supporting characters, who are all kinds of people who match up the male and female protagonists. They really fall in love for the sake of falling in love. Maybe the author has not talked about it.

Overall it's okay, but it feels a bit fake at the end and doesn't quite follow the logic of reality. If you want to read mindless sweet stories, you can give it a try. After reading more than 70 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore, so I had to give up.

Hostess, what are you doing? I'm so speechless and embarrassed.

The name Yuyu is too funny.

The plot is okay, except that after about 60 chapters, the speed of the car is a bit ridiculous, and there are a lot of typos in the back, but overall it's okay.

They are eighteen years old, sincere and pure. They are romantic and passionate in love in another time and space

The sugar content is over the limit and the writing style is generally awkward and sweet [disgusting]