Douluo V: Natural Disaster of the Undead, Tricking Wang Donger into Killing Tang San

A time-traveler who can't remember this, forgets that, and has all kinds of weird reasons is really off-putting.

I can't even correct the most basic typos.

A protagonist who travels back in time can't remember some plot points. In the original investigation team, only one died because of Huo Yuhao's reminder. Then did someone have foresight in the place you wrote? Same casualties as the original

The protagonist's outlook on life is a bit problematic, and everything he does is inspired by himself. The person in the original novel is a bit OOC, and thinks of people too stupidly. From the main perspective, it just feels strange. Once you step out of this perspective, you will find that many things are taken for granted and regardless of the consequences. My evaluation is that there is no need to watch it, the more you eat it, the more uncomfortable it becomes.

The article is written in vernacular, with no emotional foreshadowing, and the dialogue between the characters is just to lead to the following. It's very similar to the article I wrote about that. But if the book is out of stock, you can still read it. After all, it has 400,000 words, which seems very fast.

The protagonist himself is the same as Tang San, both serious and independent.

The pace is fast, but it must be okay. If you like to read Douluo fan fiction, you can try reading it without any brain.

Um, it's a bit tacky, the characters are not three-dimensional and there are a lot of poisonous points, and the plot of reducing intelligence is a little bit lacking in details.

[Crooked mouth] known, mMV_

Good. There are a lot of typos and the ending is a bit rushed, but overall it's good.