Traveling Around the World, I Have Many Tools
行走江湖，我有很多工具人
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.0M Words
- Subgenre
- Wuxia Fantasy
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Zongheng
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326Chapters
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308Favorites
31Fans
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A beggar can still talk to these so-called martial arts masters on an equal footing, and he even talks to a friend who is drunk.
Che Zhuluan felt like he was out of his mind as he talked back and forth.
It's so long-winded~~~~~ I can't stand it anymore
Poisonous. . . If you want to establish a character, you will write it randomly and set it up randomly. Talk nonsense. The logic is messed up. I barely managed to see the part about setting up the characters, and I was immediately poisoned to death. I really can't stand it anymore.
There is a lot of nonsense, one storyline has dozens of chapters of dialogue, and the main character is a beggar. How can he ask so many questions to others? There is no need for a high-ranking warrior to explain so much to you. Do you think they are equal?
After reading 10 chapters, the content can be condensed into 3 chapters, and you will understand why the negative review
I can't stand Chapter 17, the logic doesn't make sense. It is said that it is difficult to carry a corpse, but it is not difficult to carry a stone statue? Also, when the elders of the sect went to the ruined temple to check the scene, they couldn't smell the strong smell of blood from the corpses? I always emphasize that I am exercising a big heart, but then I turn stiffly for a while, and my heart beats violently for a while. If I am a master, I can't feel it? Finally, he said that he was going back to the ruined temple and returned the gloves to others, saying that he had picked them up. . . Do you really think that people don't have brains? . .
It's too confusing. I have to explain one thing repeatedly for a long time. I'm so stupid.
Too much nonsense, talking about one thing back and forth, the number of words can't be so watery, right?
The writing is really long-winded. Che Zhulun repeatedly said that everything about your plot is fine, but 20 chapters are full of murder and glove hunting. The world view is broken down and written in pieces. You are not a systematic writer, so there is no need.