Son of Yin, Wife of Pluto

The author's writing is really good. I highly recommend reading it. However, there are some typos. I hope the author can correct them❛‿˂̵✧

I don't like this kind of heroine. She has a procrastinating personality, is procrastinating in doing things, and has a blind confidence. When facing the male protagonist, she always wants to do the opposite. Faced with the seniors who stalk her and the roommates who plot against her, she is always unable to refute, but follows other people's wishes. I've read more than 10 chapters and can't stand it anymore.

There are too many typos, which makes people look ridiculous, and the writing is mediocre.

The ending was too sloppy and many things were not explained clearly. It sucks

It's really exciting to watch until the end. The male and female protagonists are both excellent and the plot has ups and downs. Can't bear to let go

It's so ugly. The heroine is like a mouthless one. She can't fight her but doesn't call the hero when she's in danger. When she's defenseless, she doesn't blow the whistle quickly when she encounters a ghost. She has to die so that the hero can feel it, right? It's not like she doesn't know that the heroine's life is connected to the hero's. The heroine can't live even if the heroine dies. I can't stand the whole story. It's written like a happy-go-lucky person. I thought it was history, but no one knows the history of chickens.

It doesn't look good. I really couldn't stand it for the first time. I kept gritting my teeth and persisted. Today I finally decided to give up.

This novel is quite good. The only flaw is that there are a lot of typos, but it does not affect the content of the novel.

There is a novel as good as this one, "Good Evening Lord Pluto"

The ending is too hasty. Please write more. I like the ending the most.