Something's Not Right with This World
这个世界不太对劲
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.0M Words
- Genre
- Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Otherworld Continent
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Zongheng
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322Chapters
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I feel like I should give it an average rating. It was finished very hastily and there wasn't even an attractive follow-up. It may be because the platform has cut the author's salary, or it may simply be that I can't continue writing. Many holes were dug but not filled. The division of the plot is not very clear. What are the gods? What happened to the prehistoric world after coming to the mountains and seas? Who is the protagonist from the old era? The division of cultivation strength is not very clear, and the reference objects written in the article do not feel in line with their realm, and there is an image of a collapse in combat power.
A brain is a good thing, but it's a pity you don't have one.
The mountains and seas are broken, there are monsters and monsters, and the world view is laid out very well. One of the highlights is that in the world of mountains and seas, humans, gods, demons, and monsters coexist, life is wonderful, and the protagonist does not just rely on the old man to push him. The disadvantages are: the plot is not evenly divided and cannot be divided well, and it looks easy to get tired.
I came to visit with my works "Four Universes of Sky", "Xia Feng Zhan Ying", "The World of Chaos" and "The World of Chaos: Online Game Scam". My writing skills are a bit weak and there are still many shortcomings. I hope that all the masters will come to guide me and give me your advice. I am very grateful...