Fifth Shelter

As long as there are half as many typos as possible, I would also recommend it to others, but it's a pity.

It was said that they were elites selected after five years of special training, and then a bunch of people came out who were uncooperative and did their own thing. All kinds of brainlessness, is this the result of targeted special training?

There are as many typos as there are in the compositions written by primary school students.

After reading it, I found that the book was actually pretty good, with a few flaws. That is, there are a few pig teammates in this team who have been disobedient and have average abilities. The fat guy is, logically, a well-trained soldier, and obeying orders is the most basic thing. There's not much else, but it's still watchable. The main character is a good character, not a virgin, but has judgment. The most important thing is that there is no emotional line in this story, it is a story that revolves around business matters, and the ending is okay.

In the beginning chapter, everyone's character and identity are wrong. It's hard to be active underground after 50 years. There are also combat members sent to explore who either have a calm and witty personality or have certain specialties in scientific research, or they are not qualified for exploration. As a result, these people are all like funny people. The comment section also said that this is a good book, but the writing is better.

I haven't even finished the first chapter, so I'm not qualified to give an evaluation. The parts I saw were quite anti-intellectual. I didn't understand the first paragraph of the article. It first said that the base's supplies would be enough for 500,000 people for 36 years, and then said that the base has a population of 360,000 and has been in existence for 50 years. What is this trying to express? Have the resources been exhausted or can they still last for another 50 years? Then the life and death of the entire base became like an extreme sport, sending 10 people out to die every ten years. The reason is that an underground base with 360,000 people can only produce equipment for 10 people in 10 years. Then it was written that 10 people were sent 200 meters underground. The base's ability could only send them here. Considering that the doomsday that was explained before was freezing or something, this probably means sending these ten people to a position 200 meters above the ground. The question is why they can't be sent higher. Human beings can explore places that cannot be explored with large machines using single-person equipment. What's the reason? A basic base of 50W people can be built hundreds of meters underground. Geothermal energy can be used casually. This kind of technology does not use unmanned equipment to explore dangerous areas but instead uses ten lives every ten years to save them. Why does it look like a sacrifice ritual of some kind of cult...

After reading Chapter 18, Hui Gang was repulsed, and then the captain Dong Ming's intelligence was directly negative, and he walked directly into the cave, and the people inside didn't even shoot? This is illogical, a normal person would shout "no" a few times, what is the mouth used for? The people inside are not normal people, the cave is pitch black, and they can accurately aim a gun at Dong Ming's head? At this time, you don't shoot and wait for him to raise his hands and shout? Is this normal human behavior?

A middle-aged person who loves science fiction has finished reading it: the content is good, and the plot is passable, but maybe because online articles nowadays like to write a lot of words, it seems a bit draggy; on the contrary, if this article is streamlined in the style of short stories that go back to twenty years of science fiction magazines, it will be an excellent article.

It is a tragedy for society that such a good book is so cold. Reading those repetitive routines of cultivating immortals every day has become boring. I support the author. This kind of book that relies on his own writing skills is a work that embodies the author's hard work, not a so-called tool for making money.

Sorry, there are a lot of typos