Nine Heavens Swallowing Technique

The realm is not rising and there is too much nonsense.

The text is actually very good, but it's so poorly written that it's hard to comment.

It gives the reader the feeling that I can't write anymore and ends hastily.

Come out and explain to others how to solve it?

How about writing a book for your own entertainment? Grinding and chirping. Have you drank too much?

No one watching said it was good

All kinds of grinding, beginning but no end.

It shouldn't end like this

The author really deserves to die. Is the protagonist dead? ! !

The ending is uncomfortable, so bad