On the Treacherous Road

At present, the IQ is online, the logic is clear, and it is above the standard.

It's good-looking. There's not much excitement at the beginning, but it becomes very interesting after reading about twenty chapters. The story structure is relatively macro, the villain's IQ is online throughout, and there are many conspiracy theories.

What's even more speechless is that in order to force the heroine later, after the protagonist chooses to act with them, they show the protagonist's face and say that the protagonist Hong Luan Xing has moved. What are you writing about? I guess it's another article that I can't write without a woman.

The protagonist is an imbecile. He has been pushed away from the beginning. He has no choice. He first puts the protagonist through danger and then saves the protagonist. Then he keeps saying that they are the protagonist's father's subordinates. The protagonist does not know anything about his father. The protagonist is told by the so-called father's subordinates. In the end, he believes it. The protagonist's father is safely hiding abroad, but he does not call the protagonist or the protagonist's grandmother. There's no logic at all. What's even more funny is that they keep tempting the protagonist to do things with them by asking them to know the whereabouts of their father. After experiencing danger, they finally tell the protagonist that this is a test given to you by your father and a choice given to you. God's special choice allows the protagonist to choose to experience or be an ordinary person. It's ridiculous and speechless. The most speechless thing is that after pushing the protagonist to overthrow everything and follow the path they arranged, he then tells the protagonist that you don't have to go through anything and just choose to be an ordinary person. Hypocrisy of the Holy Mother. The brainless protagonist, since they said his father was fine and believed them, why would they follow him? Stupid enough to jump in yourself.

If the later part is unfinished, I will cut off the author's appendix. Come on, author!

Many people look for a sense of immersion when reading novels. If it is written in the first person, they will not be able to immerse themselves in it. It will give people the feeling → This guy is bragging in front of me.

To be honest, if you write a novel in the first person, nine times out of ten you will have to jump in.

A new book is on the shelves. I don't ask for any rewards. I hope you can comment more and give me some opinions. It doesn't matter what kind of comments you have. Thank you for your support.

Let's raise it first, and then make plans after it's fattened up.

The more I read the story, the grander it becomes, and the more I want to look back. If the author is good, he can