Palm Joy

It's a mess [anxiety], the chapters are in a mess, like copy and paste, and they are irrelevant. The more I read it, the more disgusting it becomes. It's so unreasonable that a child who was raped overnight was born, pretending to be a virgin.

It's good to watch, the plot is interesting, and the male protagonist is also interesting.

The author's writing style is okay, and the story narration is not sluggish, but the plot design is too lame. I hesitated again and again, but in order to encourage the author, I gave it a good look. I don't know how much the author knows about the duties of a bridesmaid. All the feelings the heroine encounters as a bridesmaid are superfluous. The bridesmaid cannot leave the bride and groom from the wedding day until the end of the wedding. Therefore, there is no chance for others to make a big fuss during the wedding. Everyone else can tell that the little meat bun looks like the male protagonist, except that the male and female protagonists are blind and have doubts. The old man can immediately go for a paternity test, but the male protagonist is dumbfounded so that the story can continue. Because I sometimes listen to books, I don't understand what happened when the male protagonist in Suzhou saved the female protagonist from being injured? I just remember that the heroine was in the hospital preparing to go through the discharge procedures, and the hero was sent there, and then the hospital was strictly prohibited from entering or exiting. The male protagonist is kidnapped, and the female protagonist goes to save it. The rest of the plot can only be said to be mutual rescue. Can anyone understand it and explain it to me, because I really don't want to repeat it. The heroine and her best friend Lan Lan had an encounter five years ago... And then Shen Mo, who had risked his life for the heroine, was suddenly willing to accept Lan Lan, which was a bit unexpected. I hope the author can produce more mature works through this practical experience.

The back doesn't look good, it's a mess

The front is good-looking and exciting, but the further you get to the back, the date becomes unsightly and unfinished.

Don't even know what the end of this is? Head but no tail

It's a mess, here my leg is twisted and I can walk again, and when I'm injured I can move again later, and it takes an hour to solve a broken muscle and bone that takes a hundred days.

It ended so suddenly, there was no process

It ended too suddenly!

I read this article for a long time and felt it was a waste of time. I am really speechless. Who is the audience? Does no one really care? I really want to call the police