In a world of horror, zombies are prevalent.
Ye Chen traveled through the zombie world and became the proud disciple of Taoist Master Four Eyes!
Originally, Ye Chen just wanted to live and grow silently, but unexpectedly got the "God Inn". As long as he buried the corpses of zombies and ghosts in the God Inn, he could not only control the zombies, but also get various rewards.
Ding Ding, congratulations to the host for burying a corpse. Merit points obtained: 3000 points. Gold coins obtained: 3. Spell obtained: Baidu Evil Poison Talisman LV1.
Ding Ding, congratulations to the host for burying a fox corpse. Merit points obtained: 1000 points, gold coins obtained: 1, spell obtained: Bu Gang Tread Dou Technique LV1
Nannan: Boss, you are finally here, I miss you so much.
Corpse Fox Fairy: Mr. Chen, the spring night is too short. Come to my house to dance for you.
Corpse King: Yesterday is not counted, today we are fighting for 300 rounds
I think you should re-read Mr. Zombie and other related things. After all, your writing is too bad.
I got one, it really looks like a lump
How did you achieve the peak of integration?
Chapter 40: How come his cultivation has regressed to the 9th level?
It doesn't look good because it deviates too much from the original plot. What you want is the feeling of being able to control the overall plot. If it deviates, it won't be fun.
The writing is messy and the time is not right
When writing a plot, you just follow the plot. At least the timeline is ✓. RInterpersonal relationships are even more messy. You can't match any of these. Might as well abandon the plot line. Let's take another overhead mode. Not to mention the writing style. First of all, the bullshit is wrong. Elementary school students' compositions are more logically written than yours.
What are you writing about, just word count?
The front part is well written, but the back part is so messed up. I feel a little confused, so I won't read it anymore.
What the hell are you writing? Why didn't you say that the gods and Buddhas came out kneeling on you?
I think you should re-read Mr. Zombie and other related things. After all, your writing is too bad.
I got one, it really looks like a lump
How did you achieve the peak of integration?
Chapter 40: How come his cultivation has regressed to the 9th level?
It doesn't look good because it deviates too much from the original plot. What you want is the feeling of being able to control the overall plot. If it deviates, it won't be fun.
The writing is messy and the time is not right
When writing a plot, you just follow the plot. At least the timeline is ✓. RInterpersonal relationships are even more messy. You can't match any of these. Might as well abandon the plot line. Let's take another overhead mode. Not to mention the writing style. First of all, the bullshit is wrong. Elementary school students' compositions are more logically written than yours.
What are you writing about, just word count?
The front part is well written, but the back part is so messed up. I feel a little confused, so I won't read it anymore.
What the hell are you writing? Why didn't you say that the gods and Buddhas came out kneeling on you?