My Roommate Is a Vixen

Overall, it's very good, but the details are a little lacking (ahem) and the ending is a little rushed. Where did Su Binglan go after Zhang Fan absorbed the Eight Tails of Su Zhu? It seems like you haven't returned to Tianji Sect? I hope there will be a spin-off or a second story, and I look forward to the author's next article! ! !

There is a saying that goes well: A female who is a junior in college, holds a gold brick; a female who is in her thirties, holds the world; a female who is in her thirties, ranks among the immortals

There are many pitfalls in the middle part that have not been filled in, and the ending is too hasty, leaving a feeling of unfinished content, but it is very good as a refreshing novel.

No! This golden elixir breaks through to Yuanying! Isn't it too simple and casual?

After writing it for so long, the only scenes that I found sweet were the time when Han Xiaoyue took the love potion and Liu Shuang handed her over for the first time, and these were the only two scenes in total. Although the plot is good, this kind of writing is not like a romance novel or a fantasy novel. It just doesn't look very pure. It feels like there's a little bit of each type. Secondly, regarding the emotional line, Liu Shuang's was okay, but Han Xiaoyue's was very strange. Originally, Han Xiaoyue used Zhang Fan as a thug tool, and she had to have an opportunity to know that she liked Zhang Fan, but she just felt that she fell in love with him inexplicably. And I hope the author can play with stacking boxes, that is, continue to write about Han Xiaoyue and Liu Shuang after the Thunder Tribulation Realm, or who else, or there is a magic weapon that can take so and so, and then go to the fairy world, and then the fairy world is another story. For specific examples, please refer to "Shock!" My apprentice turned out to be the Empress" Qin Tian, ​​the male protagonist. Overall, the author's writing is quite good. I complain so much, but I definitely can't write it. If you dare to write and publish, you, the author, are the best!

After writing it for so long, the only scenes that I found sweet were the time when Han Xiaoyue took the love potion and Liu Shuang handed her over for the first time, and these were the only two scenes in total. Although the plot is good, this kind of writing is not like a romance novel or a fantasy novel. It just doesn't look very pure. It feels like there's a little bit of each type. Secondly, regarding the emotional line, Liu Shuang's was okay, but Han Xiaoyue's was very strange. Originally, Han Xiaoyue used Zhang Fan as a thug tool, and she had to have an opportunity to know that she liked Zhang Fan, but she just felt that she fell in love with him inexplicably. And I hope the author can play with stacking boxes, that is, continue to write about Han Xiaoyue and Liu Shuang after the Thunder Tribulation Realm, or who else, or there is a magic weapon that can take so and so, and then go to the fairy world, and then the fairy world is another story. For specific examples, you can refer to the book "Shocked My Disciple Is Actually the Empress" by Qin Tian and An Miaoling. That book is about stacking boxes almost infinitely. But the author is already very good at being able to write this kind of article. Although the author's book is not very good now, but I complain so much, I definitely can't write it. The author is already very good. Come on, I hope we can see another Zhang Fan, Han Xiaoyue, and Liu Shuang in the "parallel world" in future books or stories

I like to read this kind of light-hearted and enjoyable immortality novels. I also like this type of atypical immortality novels. It is not as long and complicated as traditional immortality novels. The story of Han Xiaoyue and Zhang Fan is also very enviable. Thank you to the author ~ Completed

It's gone. Will there be a second sequel?

Hey, author, why don't you move Yu Sihan out? He won't die.

It's great to combine cultivation and love