With his own strength, Ye Xuan shook countless warlords, but was forced down the mountain because of nine peerlessly beautiful women. At last, the world learned what the strongest cultivator was, and beauties from every side threw themselves at him. No matter how great your power or how vast your wealth, don't act arrogant in front of me.
Synopsis 2:
He was peerless, and millions of heroes bowed before him. His domineering might subdued an arrogant goddess of war; his romantic, talented nature melted an ice-cold female CEO; his kindness and integrity brought tears to the eyes of a heartless female assassin... His arrival set the whole world dancing! (This book is packed with beautiful women, champions justice, integrity, and patriotism, and delivers invincible power without angst. A thoroughly satisfying read.)
Why do we always write about these three children? Aren't there five children? Why don't you write about those two and the other wives?
Inexplicable from beginning to end
It looks good, the links are tightly linked, and there is no procrastination.
The writing is wonderful, interconnected, and the sentences are smooth. After reading one section, I want to read the second section...
The plot of the story is vivid and exciting, the protagonist is righteous and the grievances are clear.
The names of people are written wrong in many places.
The storyline is not rigorous enough and is too pretentious! It makes readers feel like they are being fooled from time to time!
Original sentence: Ye Xuan killed Taiye Aoyue and his grandfather Taiye Haonan in the island country. Wrong, the positions of grandfather and grandson are misplaced, the names should be reversed, and the full sentence should be "Ye Xuan killed Tao Ye Hao and his grandfather Tai Ye Aoyue in the island country."
In the midst of a life-and-death confrontation, do you still need to reason with the teachings? Could you be more kind? Can you let your enemies go again and again? It can obviously kill with one strike! So indecisive?!
I have to figure out every plot in my head, can't I write it down? Not good-looking