Ye Xuan single-handedly shocked thousands of heroes, but because of nine stunning beauties, he was forced to go down the mountain. The world finally knew who the strongest immortal cultivator was, attracting beauties from all over the world to throw themselves into his arms. No matter how powerful you are, no matter how rich you are, don't be arrogant in front of me.
Introduction 2:
He is unparalleled in the world and is worshiped by millions of heroes. He is domineering and invincible and impresses the arrogant female goddess of war. He is romantic and versatile and can melt the iceberg female CEO. He is kind and upright and makes the ruthless female killer shed tears... His appearance makes the world dance! (This book is full of beauties, upright and patriotic, invincible and non-violent, absolutely enjoyable)
Why do we always write about these three children? Aren't there five children? Why don't you write about those two and the other wives?
Inexplicable from beginning to end
It looks good, the links are tightly linked, and there is no procrastination.
The writing is wonderful, interconnected, and the sentences are smooth. After reading one section, I want to read the second section...
The plot of the story is vivid and exciting, the protagonist is righteous and the grievances are clear.
The names of people are written wrong in many places.
The storyline is not rigorous enough and is too pretentious! It makes readers feel like they are being fooled from time to time!
Original sentence: Ye Xuan killed Taiye Aoyue and his grandfather Taiye Haonan in the island country. Wrong, the positions of grandfather and grandson are misplaced, the names should be reversed, and the full sentence should be "Ye Xuan killed Tao Ye Hao and his grandfather Tai Ye Aoyue in the island country."
In the midst of a life-and-death confrontation, do you still need to reason with the teachings? Could you be more kind? Can you let your enemies go again and again? It can obviously kill with one strike! So indecisive? !
I have to figure out every plot in my head, can't I write it down? Not good-looking
Why do we always write about these three children? Aren't there five children? Why don't you write about those two and the other wives?
Inexplicable from beginning to end
It looks good, the links are tightly linked, and there is no procrastination.
The writing is wonderful, interconnected, and the sentences are smooth. After reading one section, I want to read the second section...
The plot of the story is vivid and exciting, the protagonist is righteous and the grievances are clear.
The names of people are written wrong in many places.
The storyline is not rigorous enough and is too pretentious! It makes readers feel like they are being fooled from time to time!
Original sentence: Ye Xuan killed Taiye Aoyue and his grandfather Taiye Haonan in the island country. Wrong, the positions of grandfather and grandson are misplaced, the names should be reversed, and the full sentence should be "Ye Xuan killed Tao Ye Hao and his grandfather Tai Ye Aoyue in the island country."
In the midst of a life-and-death confrontation, do you still need to reason with the teachings? Could you be more kind? Can you let your enemies go again and again? It can obviously kill with one strike! So indecisive? !
I have to figure out every plot in my head, can't I write it down? Not good-looking