A True Man at the End of the Han Dynasty

At least nine points are given for creativity, six points for writing, and seven points at most. The writing is holding me back.

It's pretty cool. Apart from anything else, I've analyzed a lot and thought a lot, although I don't know if it's right or not.

In that era, women stayed at home. How did others know that your wife was beautiful? Are you afraid that someone else wants to cuckold you, but your wife wants to cheat on you?

Just write something random. Lu Bu was the one who only instigated rebellion during the Great Alliance. Now you are writing about Dong Zhuo. You should have a good understanding of history before writing.

What the hell are you writing history? He's a mercenary, he's better than a border bandit, and the physics and chemistry teacher wants to beat him up!

It feels too long-winded and makes my head hurt when I read it. Every little thing has to be so long that I have to write an inner monologue. I just want to fill in the word count.

Didn't Lu Bu just start dating Ding Yuan? Why did he appear directly at Dong Zhuo's place?? Fake Three Kingdoms fans?

Although the pace is slow, the inner activities of the characters are very interesting.

Changed! Not Liu Dapao, bad review

Now I'm worried about how long this book can last with the current results.