After Being Driven Down the Mountain by the Stunning Master, I Drifted Away

The writing is not good, and the character of the protagonist is a bit like the stupid protagonist of a villain novel.

The writing style is a bit immature, the details are too few, and the plot is not well laid out. Facts aside, it is a pretty good book.

Too many verbose words

The first twenty chapters were okay, but after the thirty chapters I started to tremble and left 888