The Owner of the White Shop, the Attention Scares Sister Zhou to Tears

It felt pretty good before, but now the popular Taoist priest plus Internet plus spiritual energy recovery plus little horror are all mixed in. The power system in the mid-term improved too quickly, and it felt like it couldn't be edited anymore. Later the power system collapsed.

It's okay. It's pretty interesting in the beginning, but it gets boring after about 50 chapters.

Goodbye (^.^)/ I originally planned to finish it, but after reading the comments section, I turned to the finale ʕ •ᴥ•ʔ… I have always liked this type of subject matter, but the plot of this article is... Quite... (;-_-)ᴇᴍᴍᴍI don't know how to say it

It's so good to watch. Hu Ge and Peng Yuyan keep trying to die later. The debts of the former pig's feet are not paid off at all. They keep playing with the female double cultivator, and the person with the pig's feet keeps resurrecting him. Later, they have more scenes than Zhu Xi. It's disgusting.

All I can say is that everyone in the protagonist group has brain problems, and the others are pretty normal.

Personally, I feel that the biggest flaw of the article is the description of the protagonist's character. The problem can be seen from the very beginning. Chen Xiao only has a little skill and starts to look like an outsider. In the later stages, it got even worse. He didn't care about anything, and just couldn't interfere with Tianji. In short, the protagonist was both responsible and upright, forcing himself to show off. Secondly, there is the protagonist group. In the early stage, it still felt like the protagonist was the main character. Needless to say, around Chapter 400, the supporting roles increased dramatically. The protagonist had nothing to do. They just came to the protagonist when they were in danger, and then the protagonist said he didn't want to take care of it and shied away. And it's a bit of a nesting doll, so anyone who's seen it will understand what I'm saying. I hope the author will continue to work hard

Personally, I think it's okay, but there are a lot of unknown heroines, which is a failure.

To put it bluntly, it's just a piece of shit, just sitting there and pretending to be it. To put it bluntly, what is he without a system?

The women in the protagonist are a bit too brainless, and there is also Sister Zhou, who made her the chief even though she knew she would do bad things. You are so lustful, why would you let her be the chief? And after you become the Lord of Hell, you are too busy. You take in a few women every day and put them in important positions regardless of whether they are useful or not. Especially Sister Zhou, every time she takes in a younger brother, no matter whether it is his fault or not, whether he has the ability or not, you have to make them a very important official. If you cause trouble, you have to let the protagonist clean up the mess. The same goes for other women.

This Zhou Shuyi fanfic Zhou Shuyi has undoubtedly become the biggest failure, there are too many scenes.