Fang Lei traveled through the prehistoric world and became the fourth person to take form after the Three Pure Ones.
It is also bound to the prehistoric selection system, and the starting selection becomes the fourth clearing.
Ziqing Hunyuan Tianzun, revealed Hongmeng to prove Pangu!
So, Fang Lei, who recognized his three good brothers, started walking around the wilderness!
He also PUAs his three good brothers from time to time.
Fang Lei: "Brother, I heard that the Dragon Clan is rich all over the world, how about we go make some money?"
Taiqing: "Isn't this not in line with benevolence and morality?"
Fang Lei: "Father has transformed the world. Which of the things in the world is not ours? The Dragon Clan has robbed the relics of Father God and should be killed!"
Under Fang Lei's lies, the entire prehistoric painting style changed!
Monster: "I have never seen such a shameless person!"
Tongtian: "My fourth brother has some strange ideas."
Fang Lei: "Brother is just here to fool you! I have a brother, but you don't!"
Laozi Yuanshi Tianzun. And Tongtian is obviously transformed by Pangu's soul. According to your opinion, the three of them are transformed by Hongmeng purple energy. Isn't this a mistake?
And Kunlun Mountain is one of the ancestors of the prehistoric times. , You tell me, he ascended from the nameless mountain range. Did heaven grant the enlightenment to Kunlun?
It was already in the early stage of Daluo Jinxian before.
Aren't Kunpeng and Blood Ant both Da Luo Jinxian?
You didn't pay attention to the background at all when writing your book. The Great Tribulation of Long Han belongs to the three tribes of Dragon, Phoenix and Qilin. Lich calamity is the witch clan and the demon clan. Anyway, it's just a mix of this and a mix of that. The description of the three clearings is also very... Flat. The most important thing is whether you can change the Chinese characters for the fourth of your four clearings. The fourth clearing is hilarious when you look at it [hehehe] [hehehe] [hehehe]
Since you are writing this thing, you should first understand the background. If you don't understand anything clearly, you will write randomly. If you haven't tried red stone before, you can try it.
Poisonous Point 1: The whole article is "dark eyes, dull cheeks, the proposal is called dim", Poisonous Point 2: The bone marrow extracted from the trap is innate bone marrow. How can a mere acquired creature extract innate things? Poison Point 3: The Four Swords of Zhu Xian are described as the accompanying magic weapons that reach the sky. Poison Point 4: The protagonist keeps imitating and leading the two to do evil things, but the magic weapon should still be used. There is a sense of deja vu that he is not afraid of betraying others and being a big fool. Just read Chapter 45
To be honest, it's pretty average.
The combat power collapsed at the beginning of this book
The subsequent plot doesn't break out of that circle, it's not good to watch.
The overall rhythm is pretty good, but it can't be saved at all.
The writing is not good at all. I can't even write it. No matter what you do, it all means the same thing. I'm done. But I didn't understand what he kept saying. I listened to it again and skipped it later, and then I understood it. He said at the beginning that he would deal with the Long Han catastrophe, and then kept talking about the Long Han catastrophe and making preparations. As a result, Long Han Haojie didn't even hit him much, and then they all beat him. They reconciled later, and it doesn't matter how strong they are. It's not long and boring. It's all a treasure hunt ahead. , Which will not be used later.
There are a lot of typos and sentences that don't make sense. Modern novels just use vernacular. You must have used the "zhi" in "Zhihuzhe" properly. The key to "within, zhong" is how to use it and whether it can be used. I've read over a hundred chapters, too many to understand, and I'm really tired.
Lao Tzu is too pure, Yuanshi Yu is clear, the sky is clear, Fang Lei is finished
Laozi Yuanshi Tianzun. And Tongtian is obviously transformed by Pangu's soul. According to your opinion, the three of them are transformed by Hongmeng purple energy. Isn't this a mistake? And Kunlun Mountain is one of the ancestors of the prehistoric times. , You tell me, he ascended from the nameless mountain range. Did heaven grant the enlightenment to Kunlun?
It was already in the early stage of Daluo Jinxian before.
Aren't Kunpeng and Blood Ant both Da Luo Jinxian?
You didn't pay attention to the background at all when writing your book. The Great Tribulation of Long Han belongs to the three tribes of Dragon, Phoenix and Qilin. Lich calamity is the witch clan and the demon clan. Anyway, it's just a mix of this and a mix of that. The description of the three clearings is also very... Flat. The most important thing is whether you can change the Chinese characters for the fourth of your four clearings. The fourth clearing is hilarious when you look at it [hehehe] [hehehe] [hehehe]
Since you are writing this thing, you should first understand the background. If you don't understand anything clearly, you will write randomly. If you haven't tried red stone before, you can try it.
Poisonous Point 1: The whole article is "dark eyes, dull cheeks, the proposal is called dim", Poisonous Point 2: The bone marrow extracted from the trap is innate bone marrow. How can a mere acquired creature extract innate things? Poison Point 3: The Four Swords of Zhu Xian are described as the accompanying magic weapons that reach the sky. Poison Point 4: The protagonist keeps imitating and leading the two to do evil things, but the magic weapon should still be used. There is a sense of deja vu that he is not afraid of betraying others and being a big fool. Just read Chapter 45
To be honest, it's pretty average. The combat power collapsed at the beginning of this book The subsequent plot doesn't break out of that circle, it's not good to watch. The overall rhythm is pretty good, but it can't be saved at all.
The writing is not good at all. I can't even write it. No matter what you do, it all means the same thing. I'm done. But I didn't understand what he kept saying. I listened to it again and skipped it later, and then I understood it. He said at the beginning that he would deal with the Long Han catastrophe, and then kept talking about the Long Han catastrophe and making preparations. As a result, Long Han Haojie didn't even hit him much, and then they all beat him. They reconciled later, and it doesn't matter how strong they are. It's not long and boring. It's all a treasure hunt ahead. , Which will not be used later.
There are a lot of typos and sentences that don't make sense. Modern novels just use vernacular. You must have used the "zhi" in "Zhihuzhe" properly. The key to "within, zhong" is how to use it and whether it can be used. I've read over a hundred chapters, too many to understand, and I'm really tired.
Lao Tzu is too pure, Yuanshi Yu is clear, the sky is clear, Fang Lei is finished