Traveling Through Another World, I Am the Trap Flow Lord

The plot is pretty good, but it's too long-winded and boring to watch.

It would be nice to get rid of a lot of verbosity, but the number of words should be reduced by two-thirds [dog head] [tilt head, laugh and cry]

The plot is smooth, but the text is lacking

In Chapter 9, the anti-bone guard hero and his subordinates are fighting, and some of them are going to kill you. Are you still arguing when you stand on the city wall? ? ?

The front part is okay, but there are always typos in the middle, and there is also a problem with the ordering of some sentences. There are a lot of words, and there is no need for those double quotes. I don't know who said it.

All I can say is that this novel has a lot of typos, a lot of repeated words, and the battles are all the same. In addition to applying the same thing, I also like to pull it out. I pull one sentence here and there and another just to make up the number of words. The fantasy swords and magic technology are just what I promised, and the journey is really smooth. Risky enemies don't choose to go directly to the best direction. The enemies also send their men to die one by one. Most of them are like this. The last and biggest drawback is that the good world view is a bit mediocre.

It's not easy to write a book, so I won't leave a bad review, but I still want to complain. This book is very ink-laden starting from the 1/3rd mark. I wanted to watch a tower defense-style battle, but in the end it was all useless plots. Secondly, the world view is too small. There is nothing else except a few princes and a few subordinates of the devil. It feels like this Divine Grace Continent has a population of just a few million people and a big city with more than 100,000 people. The ending is also sloppy. It feels like the protagonist is on the throne and there is no point in living. The world is too small.

There are many typos, and the article is mindless. In the seventh chapter, a concept-level weapon appears (a weapon that can hit 100% regardless of distance, and it is made by architecture. Is the barrel related to architecture?)

It's not a teleportation array, it's a space portal.

Seeing Chapter 55, Taylor kicked Catherine unconscious, and then swung his giant sword at Chen Shou. At this time, Chen Shou smiled and said: Lavinia. Then the halo of intelligence hit Taylor instantly. The plot is like this. Taylor knew that it was Chen Shou who killed his wife, and then took his brothers to take revenge. The result is predictable. Faced with Chen Shou, who has an aura of wisdom, he not only killed his brothers, but also swore allegiance to Chen Shou. At this time, Chen Shou randomly found a woman and said that his wife was not dead, and then Taylor excitedly licked Chen Shou's shoes. In fact, it is a story about intelligence from the beginning. Being able to read this chapter does not mean that your IQ is not good, but that there is nothing else to read.