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This? ? ? Sell ​​the job for 200 and buy the house in the countryside for 200

I feel like I haven't finished the book yet. I've written half of the book and I'll continue to add more updates.

It feels like I've only written half the book

Recommended, don't step into any trap! It's very beautiful, but I don't know why the score is low! The main plot is very upright, without those messy people and things. I really like the way and attitude of men and women in handling things!

Why do I think Zhou Zhaodi is very scheming?

The overall outline is pretty good. It's just that the words described by the villagers are too verbose, just a few will be enough. From beginning to end, someone jumps out from time to time. It's too cumbersome and makes reading unpleasant. The visual fatigue affects the whole book. If it is ten points, I can only give it six points.

The book is refreshing. The content is quite nice. The heroine is also very powerful, and she must take revenge. The character names are always written wrong, so you have to guess by yourself.

It's empty and boring, full of quarrels and fights. The heroine is either sending people away or on the way to send them away. She is procrastinating in doing things. There is no use in talking. She has no means. Rumors spread all over her own reasons. During the period of going to the countryside, she was procrastinating. I learned to explain it in person. Is it the story of The Chosen Daughter? I always thought that before going to the countryside and after going to the countryside in the early stage. The two of them were more decisive in the past, but the more they write, the more mediocre they are. They are not bland enough. Some people say that the ending is hasty. They are really written just for the sake of writing the ending. Do you rush to the finale because you want to write another book? Anyway, the writing style is not good and can be improved, but the plot is really poor. It is not a little less. Ask more about the old man in the period novel. The story is not full of plot?

I really can't stand it here. It's all about scheming and quarreling. It's all about rotten things over and over again. I'm tired of aesthetics. I haven't said it before. Four-fifths of the story is about the period of going to the countryside. There aren't many intimate things. There's no particularly attractive plot. Liu Shui The quarrels and fights on the line, and the repeated use of those barren and ugly words in the article are not interesting. There are really few well-written articles about the stages of going to the countryside → college entrance examination → academic → career → consummation. This seems to have little literary content, the method is not very low-level and boring, and it is not good to set off the heroine. There is no content in cleverness. The plot and writing skills of the assembly line need to be improved. The heroine is a little decisive but not too much. If you really want to teach a lesson, just be harsh and get rid of it once and for all?? There are only a few villagers who come to the door repeatedly. They talk nicely and don't listen, so they drive away, and they come again and again. Don't watch it. There are a lot of words, and they are all used frequently and repeatedly. If you want to write a book, you should try to write well. At least the words should be clever and the plot description should capture one of the highlights. Even if it is a period article, have you found someone to look for things from that era? Isn't it better to use it to polish it than to imagine it out of thin air?

It was written with no care at all, and the last names were all messed up.