Abandoned Daughter Is Frivolous: Holding Space in Hand and Blasting into the Sky

The heroine can only talk every day. Apart from being decisive to the useless servants, the others can only talk, and basically everyone inside is ungrateful.

One word, chaos! The plot is a mess, and it feels very satisfying when you first start it, but it's all illogical. It's inexplicable for a group of people to go crazy after level 4 Qi training! Not good-looking

None of the characters are likeable, all are hated,

What is the Lu family! Why keep those things there if you don't kill them? ! ! It makes readers furious! Those who should be kicked out of the house should be kicked out of the house! Let the scores be settled. I feel that she is the most powerful in the Lu family, but she has done nothing, and she has always made the Lu family a mess! The mother of the original heroine also seems to be an incomprehensible and ageless love brain. When I saw Chapter 19, I felt like it was always a mess that made people angry. The male protagonist said he was the world master, but he appeared in front of the female protagonist as shamelessly as the guy below, making it look like the female protagonist and the sword master were a couple. The male protagonist's behavior makes people feel very vulgar and un-reverent. Read the comments again and go! Come on, heroine

The plot of the story is well designed. Logically speaking, the length is quite pleasant. After all, it will not be very boring or tiring. However, since it is a novel about cultivating immortals, it may be too fast. Geniuses do exist. For others, it may take ten or twenty years, or decades or hundreds of years to break through a level. Then the corresponding level of genius may be three to five years, and thirty to fifty years. But this... In terms of time and heaven, you can break through casually... Let alone the space, how can you do it? Who is a cultivator who doesn't have space? It's too easy. There are immortals everywhere. There is no need to work hard, and there is no need to fear any powerful person, because the heroine can resist pressure and attacks that are several levels stronger than her at any time and anywhere. I hope the author will continue to work hard and look back at what he has written, proofread it before uploading it.

It's not decisive at all. Every time the heroine wants to kill someone, she is saved by someone else. Why does she have to talk so much nonsense! Stop watching!

It's a pity to throw it away, but it's tasteless to eat.

The heroine is not cruel enough, even after being bullied, she still doesn't kill him.

I'm tired of reading long novels, but I think this short story is quite good.

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