I'm About to Ascend, so the Newbie Mission Comes?

Very good-looking, very good-looking, I like many heroines

It's so well written, why don't you have any other works?

Too bad. The division of strength is just like children playing house? One day you can beat the holy beast, and the other day you will be afraid of the false holy beast. What are you doing?

I remember reading a novel called Mahayana Period, where the system comes. Is it similar?

I also feel that this plot is a bit retarded

What nonsense did you write?

The realm is constantly changing, it's amazing!

After reading it, I don't recommend watching it here. If you encounter a stubborn person, just pretend that I didn't say anything. Let me talk about the problem of the whole novel: 1 The plot is blunt and confusing (for example, it is said at the beginning that the protagonist is about to ascend. It stands to reason that the protagonist at this time, if not invincible, should not have many opponents. As a result, no matter who he fights, it is extremely difficult. There is also a junior sister who has just started, who dares to fight The head disciple, the protagonist's junior sister, is tit for tat. It would make sense if this junior junior sister who had just started had a prominent family background, but she did not. She still had to listen to her opinions when encountering problems. I was really convinced. How could she have the courage in the world of immortality where strength is respected) 2 kinds of horse stories (the first one is good, but then everything starts to get messy. As long as it is a girl or a mother, as soon as she sees the protagonist, she will fall hopelessly in love with him, and she will try her best to have sex with him) 3. Incorrect three views (first of all, the protagonist beautifies the scumbag. If the world of immortality is different from ordinary people and takes what each other needs, then it can be barely understood. It is difficult to understand that the witch has killed so many people, but the protagonist does not kill, but still raises them. Protect and protect the snake demon you encountered during the investigation of the plague. The protagonist only defeated the immortal who wanted to kill her, but the protagonist snatched the treasure and killed her. She also said that the snake demon did many evil things. You can talk about why the snake demon did so many evil things. The plague was not caused by it. The sacrifices were made voluntarily by the villagers. It's really speechless.) 4. The plot of a brainless idol TV series (this one is really the most speechless of all). As I explained earlier, it is not difficult to fly with a sword. It can be said to be a small magic. People who have just started to get into the city have forgotten this small magic collectively in order to let the protagonist perform or for the woman to hit him. , Unreasonable and even more unreasonable, and after the war, the protagonist has to get close to see that a woman's clothes are torn. The five senses of a cultivator are far beyond ordinary people, let alone the protagonist who is about to ascend. I believe that a normal person who is not a practitioner and is not blind can see it from a distance. There are too many bloody plots like this) After reading it, I felt that this novel was written by the author for himself. He felt happy, but the readers felt uncomfortable.

It's too bad, there's a typo every other paragraph. Can't even remember the realm you set? One is the Tribulation Stage, the other is the Out-of-body Stage, and the other is the Yuan Ding Stage. Doesn't the author know how to type? ! ?

This subject is actually the same (the counterattack system is only available in the adult stage), but the writing is not as good as his. I hope to continue to work on it. The plot is a bit retarded and the emotions are very blunt. I hope the sentences can be refined more.