The Evil Little Doctor

I came to visit with my works "Four Universes of Sky", "Xia Feng Zhan Ying", "World of Chaos" and "World of Chaos: Online Game Scam". My writing skills are a bit weak and there are still many shortcomings. I hope that all the masters will come to guide me and give me your advice. I am very grateful...

There are too many typos and the story has poor coherence.

No matter how good the idea is, the protagonist will be written as a pig's foot because of the author's writing skills.

Why is it 90% consistent with Wang Tiezhu's novel?

Although the story is ordinary, the emotions are sincere, abundant and touching. ..